this story absolutely blew my mind, i love it!! definitely addicting, i spent two hours reading this non-stop...love! <3

I LOVE this story. One of my all time favs. Seriously I think I've read it four times now. Out of all the EXB Twilight fic writers I think you've done the best job of writing the characters as they already were and if it aint broke why fix it? I think Bella would have reacted exactly as she did in your story to Edward leaving and all that jazz. Anywhozel, I just thought, after reading it so many times, I should review. Thanks for writing and again, it was fantastic!

In this chapter it seemed to indicate that Edward could read Bella's thoughts. Is that what was intended?

I did enjoy this chapter-but it is seriously just Bella and Edward all over again like in Twilight.

I think it would have been good to give Carlisle more of an introduction-as in he was Edward's dad, etc. Lots and lots of details in the chapter-kind of hard to follow.

This story has gotten really far fetched to me-but I will keep reading nonetheless. Are you working on anything new for the future? :-)

Well, I guess I will be curious how we can keep up with Bella and Edward if they have no contact with Simmons...

YAY-I am glad to see Edward and Bella re-enter the story. Why in the world would Tanya be hanging out with non vegetarian vampires?

Wah...with 7 months passing I am guessing I am not going to get to hear about Bella telling Charlie and Renee her and Edward married-and I am not going to get to hear about Bella's change. Any way you would write up a short one chapter on those events? I will keep reading this one but I definitely wish it had more Edward and Bella in it...

Throwing Tanya into the loop is an interesting twist. So I am guessing Simmons will become more aware of vampires than I had imagined, leaving this story with some serious potential. :-)

I am really disappointed it will only be from Simmons POV. I really wanted to hear about them telling Charlie and Renee they were maried, the change, their life after, etc and I don't see how that can be done from Simmons POV. Hopefully you will surprise me though! :-)

I would have reviewed many more chapters but I read much of it on my iphone. I totally loved this story. A line that totally made me LOL was the one about Rosalie and the shoes. I love the way you set it up with the drunk guy saying Edward was playing dirty. I thought that was totally realistic with the emotionally unstable Bella. Great story-I look forward to reading the sequel now. I love happy endings. :-)

btw-I LOVE Alias too. It is also my favorite show. I have all of the seasons on DVD. :-)

Both stories were fun to read! Thanks!

Aw-Vaughn is so likeable...but of course my choice is Edward. :-)

Looking forward to reading this story--and it is obvious what the C stands for. :-) How in the world could Bella not know, especially with the Alaska tie?