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Reviews For: Barrier

Alle40812 2008-02-23 ch 1,	abuseAre u planning on updating any time soon? It's been like four months.
Alle40812 2007-11-19 ch 2,	abuseThis is one of the greatest fan fics I have ever read! Great writing. I can just see it all playing out in my head! I loved the pot pie fight! Hope there are more moments like that. I can't wait to see what happens to maya and will! Will check back daily!
chattypandagurl 2007-11-07 ch 2,	abuseAnother great chapter. I loved the fact that Will didn’t come bursting through the door to save the day –Maya can take care of herself, but it was a truly scary moment when she realized who the intruder is. I wonder if Will’s employers have somehow caught on to their romance? Kate seemed to have footage of their time together. I also liked the ambiguity with Duncan…it’s interesting that he refused the Fourth Branch’s offer –he almost seems the type of person to do anything to save himself. Perhaps it is only a ploy, and his time in prison is only temporary? Maybe that’s why Maya was attacked…her brother had betrayed her. Anyway, great job, I’m really looking forward to see how she handles her injuries and trauma, and what Will does once he returns.
chattypandagurl 2007-10-20 ch 1,	abuseI really enjoyed this; other than a few grammatical mistakes, it was extremely well written. You stayed true to their characters, and I really liked that Maya had a crisis of conscience that even she could not understand at first. Their first kiss was great, I loved how real the situation felt –I only wish we could have seen something like that on screen. I hope you continue this for at least another chapter, to see her confronting Will. Overall, great job!
Nariel Tinuviel 2007-10-20 ch 1,	abuseHey, Song! It's Lessien Tinuviel, Clara from the Traveler forum. =) I always love a Will/Maya story, I hate that we never got to see how they fell in love in the show. Are you planning to add more chapters? The part in the bookstore was cute, romantic, and bittersweet all at once, good job with the writing, Song. Aside from a couple of grammatical/spelling errors, you did great! Keep it up.

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