Nice story but I wish I knew what happens to her other group - especially Shippo and how she continues to go after the jewel and Naraku. But still, good story, really liked it.

I think it was reeaally sweet ^-^

This was pretty good.

AW THAT WAS SO SWET
WILL THEY HAVE KIDS

I kinda liked this story, but there were a few problems that I find myself having when I read this, but I kept reading, and found that I kinda liked this story. This was still kinda OOC' ish and I think that you could do better, you have that kind of ability, and I know that you do. Please, disregard this if you like that OOc stuff, I just find miself having a few problems with it.

aww so sweet but at the same time hot!!

This story is amazing(: I love Sesshomaru.

This was so adorable! [sigh] Every female needs a Sesshoumaru! :)

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I liked the story, it was sweet and interesting.

Wow, Kagome seemed really bitchy in this one-shot!

that was sweet. i really like this pairing. I do like that Inuyasha went all big brother at the end.

love the story but will there be another chapter??

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

You are a very good author, and you checked for spelling very good on your own, without the Spell Check. I hope you write another Fanfiction soon. Silverbug2012

WOW WOW & WOW! This Is GREAT! (Snort) You THINK Every Lemon Is "GREAT"! (Growl) SHUP UP FLUFFY! Sorry 'bout "HIM"! He's just like that 'cause he can't write or "THINK" of a "GREAT" lemon to write! (Giggle) Hey you don't know that I CAN write a BETTERlemon! (Snicker) Who would it be about Mr.Smarty Pants?! (Snort) Well for that it will be about ME & RIN! (GASP) Fluffy (Sob) How (Hiccip) Could (Sob) YOU! I "THOUGH YOU LOVED ME! (SNICKER) You are so easy to Fool! (GASP) (Growl) You...You JERK! I...HATE...YOU! (Stops Laughing) Kiki what...what did you say! (GROWL) (GASP) What did I say? (Shock) (Then Koga The Prince Wolf Demon Walks In) You said you hate Sesshomaru (He's MY Fluffy) Me-When did you come in?! Koga-Just a while ago. Fluffy-Well get out this is between me & my Woman Wolf Boy! Koga-What did you. Me-Okay okay stop it you two. You know I hate it when you guys fight! (Hiccips) Fluffy & Koga- Sorry. Me & Fluffy-WHAT are you doing here instead of insulting Fluffy/Me?! Koga-Well sence you said you "Hate" (Glurps) "Fluffy" (Gagging Noises Coming From Inuyasha In The Closet)I though you would give me a second chance to prove I love you! Me-(Blushes) Well Koga I Love You (Koga Perks Up) (Fluffy's Eyes Flicker red & He Growls In A Dangerous Way) But I'm Deep in LOVE with Flu- Sesshomaru! (Koga gets A Disgusted Look On His Face) Koga-Kiki what the hell is it with him that you "LOVE"?! (Kagome In The Back Says "It's his MONEY every girl wants him for his looks & his money!) Sesshomaru-Is that true Kiki? (Looks At Me With A Sad Look) (I look Down Before I Look at Him) Me-At...At first it was. (Sesshy's Face Turned To A Angery Look) (Koga Perks Up Then) Koga-I knew it! I knew it! Sesshy-(Mumbles) Should have listen to that wrench 'bout...I should have Given Rin A chance. Me-Wait Wait Wait Before you jump to concludions. I said "At first it was. Gosh, I was just useing you Sesshomaru. But how I saw that look in your eyes when you saw me coming. I just wanted to prove to my 'so calle friends' that I can make you fall in love with me then I would break up with you when you give me eveything I wanted! But that got changed. When you got stab & shot Sesshomaru I Though I Would die. then I started wondering if I 'Should' break up with you?. (Sesshy Just Snorts) (So Does Koga) Me-I started getting this weird felling I ONLY got once. And it happend to be Love! (Short Laugh) Me-Right then & there I knew I really did LOVE you & I would never use again! (I Started Crying By Then) Me-So I went (Sob) to vist (Hiccip) you in the (Sob) Hospital! (Sesshomaru Comes Over To Hug Me But I Put My Hand In The Way To Stop Him) Me-Sesshomaru I REALLY DO LOVE YOU & ONLY YOU! But evryone thinks I only want you (Sob) for (hiccip) Your Frickin' Money! I would KILL everyone who said that-. (Kagome Runs Out Of The Closet Screaming Inuyasha Runnin' After Her!) (We All Look After Them) Me-Well Any ways I would but there's one thing in the way. (I Smile) Sesshy & Koga-What is that "thing"? Me-You really want to know?! (Laugh While Saying That) Both Of Them-Hell Yeah! Me-Okay Okay But That One Thing Well Person In My Way Is Sessh...Sesshomaru. (Looks Down Blushing) (Sesshy & "Wolf Boy" Are In Shock) Me-I really do love you Sesshomaru but I love for who you are. Not for your money or looks. okay I love you for who you are & your looks. Sesshomaru then hugs me. Then he Bent his Head & said I love you to Kiki. Then we Started kiss even more. We were in my room so he picked me up & set me down on the bed with him on the top of me. Koga-Uh HELLO I'm still here. I raise myhand & poof Koga diseriped. Sesshomaru then took of my clothes & his & you Know what happends (Wink) The next moring Sesshomaru is awake looking at me. I wake up & he says Hey. then I say hey back. Fluffy-I have a good story know. me-Huh? Fluffy-A "GREAT" lemon story. (I Blush) Me & Fluffy-Well your Story Was Wonderful/Great! (Laugh)Sesshomaru & Kiki (Me)-Later Hiei's Ice Maidan! ( Fluffy (KIKI's Boy) KIKI (Fluffy's Gurl) ) Well Later From The Both Of Us! Sesshy Really Loves This Lemon He Only Thinks of Me As Kagome!