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| jamy98 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abusethat was really lovely. You really captured the nuances of grief. Anger, sadness, denial, loss, etc. I especially loved the last part about the Quidditch pitch. I agree that fred would like that alot. |
| Da Phoenix 13 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseaw! that was wonderful! and so sad... great job! |
| Bad Mum 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseVery well written. I love how George is blaming himself (natural, I'd say). The one thing I'd criticise is that I think it is far too early for George to have done anything in terms of coming to terms with or accepting Fred's death. Intellectually maybe, but definitely not emotionally. Having said that, I loved the whole piece, and the interaction between George and his father. "He sounded like the scared little boy he had never been, because he had always had his best friend at his side as a source of comfort and confidence" was a great line. |
| Helena Prince 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseIts lovely, especially for a first fic. I added it to my C2, for DH post fiction. :) |
| Tigress-A True Marauder 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseAw! All the stories I've read about Fred's death are all good, but this one is taken me to heart. I loved it! *nod nod* ~Tigress, a True Marauder~ |
| winnifred 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. It's so realistic and you portrayed the characters perfectly! Maybe a prequel for when Nana Weasley died? That'd be pretty sweet. Anywho, great job. Favorites? I think so. |
| FelsGoddess 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseAw, nice work. |