OMg I'm so happy you caught the fact That Aerith just has to ask once and Cloud does it!
I loved this story it was really cute and fun to read.

Love it. Aerith definitely has him under her spell :).

yet another great story from you, bee! :D
i love how you just wrote something so simple and beautiful, just from a little observation.

- trankwility

oh yeah! good job..even i didnt notice. =D

It was short but I liked it:D

lol tifa just isn't as good as aertih! that was really sweet!
xx