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The Aquatic Chewbacca
2008-06-11
ch 10,
abusethis is honestly the best GenexFinny thing i've read on this site. i wish you'd continue :'(
-tac
Mademoiselle Fantome
2008-05-18
ch 1,
abuseOOC-ness on Finny's part.
jean kitsune
2008-04-25
ch 10,
abuseuh, this is a repeat of the last chapter--
ahhelga
2008-04-25
ch 10,
abuseWell, I'm super happy that you updated (finally ;P), but I'll have to make this quick.

I was a little confused, but it was all good. :D I love it as usual.

that's me
ahhelga
aka Pauline
Raisins-and-Kleenex
2008-04-23
ch 9,
abuseYay! My friends and I aren't the only ones who know that Finny and Gene are gay! I think it's a great representation of the stereotypes and abuse that homosexuals recieve from their peers, and the rejection they must feel.
Rizzo-the-Rat
2008-04-02
ch 9,
abuseI remember reading this book when I was 14 and wishing that Gene and Finny would just kiss already. And, It was the first time I realized I dug men with other men. 11 years later, and I still dig it. Anyway, awesome story.
grecianxpiratex07
2008-03-31
ch 3,
abuseHAHA!

we're forced to read this for English class, and we can't help but laugh after every few paragraphs. Man, you can interpret this book in so many wrong ways...

We're only on Chapter 5, but Carey, Richmond, Emma M., Emma W. Kaleigh, and Kendra spoiled it by reading ahead and telling the class how Finny dies. But, when Finny fell from the tree in chapter 4 (i think...?), we thought he'd die b/c of having AIDS (yeah, our whole class of 30 believes in GeneFinny XD), but Emma, Carey, and Richmond looked ahead and found out that Finny DID die, but not the way everyone expected...lol.

I need to go finish reading chapter 5. man, my class is so behind compared to the others! XD

happy writings! check out mine sometime. ^_^

~grecianxpiratex07~
Mick
2008-03-26
ch 9, anon.
abuseOh my god, this story is amazing!! :D I love how you characterize Gene and Finny... I could really see into themselves and feel their emotions. The homophobia in the story is something I could actually see happening in real life, 1940s or 2008. I love you! *glomps* Please update soon!
MatoakaWilde
2008-02-22
ch 9,
abuseThis is a nice story ! I haven't read A.Sep. Peace fics in a while, but his one was good!
MatoakaWilde
2008-02-22
ch 1,
abuseLovelY!!
BriFMAluver
2008-02-20
ch 9,
abuseWow, intense chapter! Please update soon, i really like this story! ^_^
Spazz Monkey
2008-02-12
ch 9,
abuseOh my gods. This is amazing.
kohana92
2008-02-10
ch 9, anon.
abuseI have to agree, I think the flashbacks are very effective, and a really good writing style to use. At first I'm a bit confused, but it just makes me want to read more. Keep up the good work!
ahhelga
2008-02-09
ch 9,
abuse:D OH MY GOSH. I'm so mad that I didn't get to this earlier!

At first I was iffy about your style of flashbacks, but I realized it wouldn't have worked as efficiently if you didn't use it like that. It gives us a preview of what's to come, and I think it's perfect. And Finny is perfect. Finny being oblivious is a tad overdone, or it may be an act, so it's refreshing to see that he admitted that he knew what he was doing to Gene. Plus, it makes him more human.

You did a wonderful job. :] Wow, I can't wait to see where this goes. SO HURRY WITH THAT NEXT CHAPTER!

that's me
ahhelga
aka Pauline
55-Rue-Plumet
2008-02-08
ch 9,
abuseVery lovely! I especially liked the incredible description at the beginning. Only one critique: "ammends" --> amends. Please update soon! :)
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