Whoa...deep.
Spooky and creepy.
You write insanity well.
Peace and Love,
-XOX, Pangie

hahahahahah ulquiorra as a waiter that is good but the hitsuhina sucked i hate that pairing

Awesome; pure, cracked up awesomeness.

Are you nuts that was hilarious. I dare u to do Prince Ali next though.

someones been watching aladdin too much

ROTFLMAO!

Defenetly turn it into a full story

Lessee, poor Makoto almost getting raped by Hinamori and then thrust into an Aladdin parody whose wrongness is only exceeded by its comedic value :D

Interesting plot gerbils yes indeed...

"and until recently didn't get any powers until Urahara dressed her up as a Sentai reject"

Wait, when did this happen?

nothin to be sorry about, that was funny.

I just cant stop picturing Aizen dubbed by Robin Williams now.

...Yea... I'm with Ichigo with this one. What the Fuck.

Nothing to appologize for man...nothing at all!

HAH! Ichigo and co just got Genie'd...Robin Williams Style!

You have GOT to do everyone's reactions to that little sequence.

Youruichi: Oh...I miss the tail...
Byakuya: The boy must die...
Ikkaku: (Now sporting a Polnareff haircut) Hey! I still have my hair! (Poof Bald) DAMMIT!

I am simply LMAOing at your story, it is just that funny.
Keep up the good work, and - if you feel like it - take a look at my "A Bleach Musical !" fic.

I would like this to be a full story. But you would have to start at the begining how he was made and stuff but I like his attitude.