...That is so adorably Luke. X3 Heehee. I also love Luke's thought about Jade being a vampire.

Great job~!

~*Digitaldreamer*~

aww that was so cute!! ^^ I enjoyed this story much ^_^ sweet job I loved the ending :)

"They’re so big and shiny and cool … I dunno! I just love golems!"

Dean Stark, the protagonist of Wild ARMs 5, said something like that too. You play that game?

Hehehe, Luke's train of thought is so right!! Of course the golems are big, shiny and cool. XD

It's a little bit unusual to make a fanfic from such a forgettable part of the game, but I loved it. The title is so fitting.

Aw, that's so cute~! xD; That's all I have to say, it's just that cute! I don't see any errors or typos (from my poor knowledge of grammar)!