*squeals at the last part*
haha Ayumu, you gotta see what's right in front of you
:) cute
love it
-Kaiyako

aw...
that was sweet as well...

Dude. You.are.AWESOME!

I'm so favoriting you...

Thats really cute. I really love it.

Uwah... Umbrella love stories are my faves. XD Especially this one! >.

Please continue this! It'll be really nice if this was a chaptered fic. Ayumu and Hiyono are so cute! X3

wai~ so sweet! like hiyono said ^^

ayumu-kun even run in the rain because he is afraid hiyono will be cold! what a...responsive boyfriend? XD

sweet :)

FWI! It's so CUTE and FLUFFY and in character! I luff FLUFF! Whoot! It makes me go SQUE! Awesome grammar, great story! Keep it up!! Yesyes!! Gak! No time for usual long review, I'm off to errands and youth group and work, oh my! Tootles!

Aww.
I'm not going to say anything intelligent today. You melt my brain into a puddle of "aww".