 Everybody's-Fooled 2009-02-12 . chapter 1OH GOOD GOD! And the horrible thing is...
I can see that happened, my friend. XD |
 Migs4JasperWhitlock 2008-09-15 . chapter 2UPDATE PLEASE
ITS SO FUNNY |
 Sphinxy8a 2008-04-07 . chapter 2Why is there not another chapter to this?! It was starting to get good! Over all awesome story. Nice use of spanish amigo. |
 tara-chan03 2008-02-06 . chapter 2you def. have to write more.
haha.
you left off on such a cliff hangerr. -_-
how coukd you do that to us? T_T |
 kir-chan 2008-01-12 . chapter 2 great story, i cant wait for chapter 3! |
 RosalieAnne 2007-12-20 . chapter 2Hey did you give up? this is turning out to be really funny. please finish it. |
 kyoskitten92 2007-11-21 . chapter 2LOL! That is so funny! Keep it up please! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
 Anime Nite 2007-11-12 . chapter 2Your awesome! |
 Dulce 2007-11-05 . chapter 2 LOL! ( I love tohru's dream! LOL)
Dirty, dirty Kyo!! XD
(Umm...you can't spell in spanish can you? But that's okay!!
numero dos = number two) |
 Kanamelover 2007-10-26 . chapter 2gawd I hope you didn't/don't take spanish cause that is not how you spell two^^ Anyway this is so hilarious! Way creepy but still funny |
 dark mirth 2007-10-18 . chapter 2oh how scandalous! Hmm... I hope no one else is awake! |
 Ookami Hime Suriya 2007-10-18 . chapter 2lmao
Uno Numbero Twozo?
nice spanish translations lol
Tohru has a dirty mind...hah
Kyou rox my sox baby!
rofl ^^
OHS |
 shannny2k 2007-10-18 . chapter 2Alright that was absolutely BEAUTIFUL! I was laughing my @$$ off the whole time I was reading :D I swear if I had plot bunnies like this I would be a very happy person indeed
Keep up the good work!
-shan |
 RogueHoney 2007-10-18 . chapter 2yikes. i would be annoyed if i got hit in the head w/ a door. lol update soon. |
 Ashley Jo 2007-10-18 . chapter 2 continue |