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EmoSunshine
2009-11-29 . chapter 1
I laughed so hard. Loved the story. Keep writing.
Sesshysgirl06
2009-11-14 . chapter 1
I don't see why you don't have more reviews! This was so awesome to read! I loved every minute of it! And the fact that it was NARU/Sasu was the best part. Everyone is forever having it Sasu/Naru and that is a little upsetting! Great story!
narusasuHOLiC
2009-09-03 . chapter 1
I loved this!
Really well written. :D
Chadyz
2009-08-24 . chapter 1
Super histoire, et bien chaude =^^= J'aime bien le déroulement en trois parties, et puis je peux même reviewer en français, le top ! xD Ma partie préférée...hum je pencherai bien pour la première ^^ Vive le NaruSasu smut !
Akira Nishikawa
2009-01-19 . chapter 1
*noseblood* ^^ what else can i say, I totally enjoy the story
ami-chan
2008-12-22 . chapter 1
omfg
that was absolutely amazing please write more like that...
i am still in shock...still in shock...
x...(still slightly dazed)
Lightwings
2008-12-14 . chapter 1
Hi again,
that was as an nice story as the other "subtle seduction".
Really good and really hot.
I love it;)

See you soon
Angel
Cheetah192119
2008-08-31 . chapter 1
I love it. It was unique. I loved the song and imagining Sasuke's sexy dance. All my praise you have won. Good luck in everything you do. Until next time! Ja ne! Adeu! Ciao!
sasunaruroxs9300
2008-08-04 . chapter 1
*laughing uncontrolably* That was the funnist shit ever im Uchiha Freakin Sasuke was dancing no less singing to buttons im sorry but that was funny I really love the story YAY SASUNARU OR NARUSASU FOREVER!
inashosetai
2008-07-22 . chapter 1
Lol. This story is still awesome in my books of awesome stories. XD
False-Image
2008-06-24 . chapter 1
It was so so hot!! You're such a talented writer! I really like your work so I'm off to read the rest of your writing! ^_^
sasquatchsnake
2008-05-30 . chapter 1
Man... nice. :D Definitely hot.
chocolatelover1
2008-03-18 . chapter 1
...wow...lol
Cute and funny!
Black Shadow of the Dark
2008-03-16 . chapter 1
Buttons by pussycatDolls? OMG! sasuke cough::dancing::cough to that is HAWT. Nice FF ya got here. ja till next time~
Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitten
2008-03-11 . chapter 1
God, it had been so long from the last update that I had forgotten the whole fic... xD Thx for the UD, i hope you'll UD ASAP... thx...

The song lyrics has absolutely nothing to do with your fic... It's just a way to tell you that I was here and that I loved your story...
... just song lyrics, don't mind me...

Mama please stop cryin'
I can't stand the sound
Your pain is painful
and it's tearin' me down

I hear glasses breaking
As I sit up in my bed
I told god you didn't mean
Those nasty things you said
You fight about money
about me and my brother
And this I come home to
This is my shelter

It ain't easy, growin' up in World War 3
Never knowin' what love could be
You'll see, I don't want love to destroy me
Like it has done my family

Can we work it out?
Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better
Mommy I'll do anything
Can we work it out?
Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better
Daddy please don't leave

Daddy please stop yellin'
I can't stand the sound
Make mama stop cryin'
'Cause I need you around
My mama she loves you
No matter what she says it's true
I know that she hurts you
But remember I love you too!

I ran away today, ran from the noise
Ran away (ran away)
Don't wanna go back to that place
But don't have no choice, no way

It ain't easy, growin' up in World War 3
Never knowin' what love could be
But I've seen, I don't want love to destroy me
Like it did my family

Can we work it out?
Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better
Mommy I'll do anything
Can we work it out?
Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better
Daddy please don't leave

In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
Let's play pretend,
and act like it Comes naturally
I don't wanna have to split the holidays
I don't want two addresses
I don't want a stepbrother anyways
And I don't want my mom to have to change her last name

In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
We look pretty normal
let's go back to that
In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
Let's play pretend,
act like goes naturally

In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
We look pretty normal
let's go back to that
In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
Let's play pretend, act like it
Comes naturally
(can we work it out)
(can we be a family)
(promise ill be better)
(mom ill do anything)
(can we work it out)
(can we be a family)
(promise ill be betta)
(dady please dont leave)

In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
We look pretty normal
let's go back to that
In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
We look pretty normal
let's go back to that

Daddy don't leave... daddy don't leave
Daddy don't leave
turn around please
remember that the night you left you
took my shining star?
daddy dont...daddy dont leave
daddy dont leave
dont leave us here alone

Mom l'll be nicer
I'll be so much better
I'll tell my brother
I won't spill the milk at dinner
I'll be so much better
I'll do everything right
I'll be your little girl forever
I'll go to sleep at night
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