 EmoSunshine 2009-11-29 . chapter 1I laughed so hard. Loved the story. Keep writing. |
 Sesshysgirl06 2009-11-14 . chapter 1I don't see why you don't have more reviews! This was so awesome to read! I loved every minute of it! And the fact that it was NARU/Sasu was the best part. Everyone is forever having it Sasu/Naru and that is a little upsetting! Great story! |
 narusasuHOLiC 2009-09-03 . chapter 1 I loved this!
Really well written. :D |
 Chadyz 2009-08-24 . chapter 1Super histoire, et bien chaude =^^= J'aime bien le déroulement en trois parties, et puis je peux même reviewer en français, le top ! xD Ma partie préférée...hum je pencherai bien pour la première ^^ Vive le NaruSasu smut ! |
 Akira Nishikawa 2009-01-19 . chapter 1*noseblood* ^^ what else can i say, I totally enjoy the story |
 ami-chan 2008-12-22 . chapter 1 omfg
that was absolutely amazing please write more like that...
i am still in shock...still in shock...
x...(still slightly dazed) |
 Lightwings 2008-12-14 . chapter 1Hi again,
that was as an nice story as the other "subtle seduction".
Really good and really hot.
I love it;)
See you soon
Angel |
 Cheetah192119 2008-08-31 . chapter 1I love it. It was unique. I loved the song and imagining Sasuke's sexy dance. All my praise you have won. Good luck in everything you do. Until next time! Ja ne! Adeu! Ciao! |
 sasunaruroxs9300 2008-08-04 . chapter 1*laughing uncontrolably* That was the funnist shit ever im Uchiha Freakin Sasuke was dancing no less singing to buttons im sorry but that was funny I really love the story YAY SASUNARU OR NARUSASU FOREVER! |
 inashosetai 2008-07-22 . chapter 1Lol. This story is still awesome in my books of awesome stories. XD |
 False-Image 2008-06-24 . chapter 1It was so so hot!! You're such a talented writer! I really like your work so I'm off to read the rest of your writing! ^_^ |
 sasquatchsnake 2008-05-30 . chapter 1Man... nice. :D Definitely hot. |
 chocolatelover1 2008-03-18 . chapter 1...wow...lol
Cute and funny! |
 Black Shadow of the Dark 2008-03-16 . chapter 1Buttons by pussycatDolls? OMG! sasuke cough::dancing::cough to that is HAWT. Nice FF ya got here. ja till next time~ |
 Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitten 2008-03-11 . chapter 1God, it had been so long from the last update that I had forgotten the whole fic... xD Thx for the UD, i hope you'll UD ASAP... thx...
The song lyrics has absolutely nothing to do with your fic... It's just a way to tell you that I was here and that I loved your story...
... just song lyrics, don't mind me...
Mama please stop cryin'
I can't stand the sound
Your pain is painful
and it's tearin' me down
I hear glasses breaking
As I sit up in my bed
I told god you didn't mean
Those nasty things you said
You fight about money
about me and my brother
And this I come home to
This is my shelter
It ain't easy, growin' up in World War 3
Never knowin' what love could be
You'll see, I don't want love to destroy me
Like it has done my family
Can we work it out?
Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better
Mommy I'll do anything
Can we work it out?
Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better
Daddy please don't leave
Daddy please stop yellin'
I can't stand the sound
Make mama stop cryin'
'Cause I need you around
My mama she loves you
No matter what she says it's true
I know that she hurts you
But remember I love you too!
I ran away today, ran from the noise
Ran away (ran away)
Don't wanna go back to that place
But don't have no choice, no way
It ain't easy, growin' up in World War 3
Never knowin' what love could be
But I've seen, I don't want love to destroy me
Like it did my family
Can we work it out?
Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better
Mommy I'll do anything
Can we work it out?
Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better
Daddy please don't leave
In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
Let's play pretend,
and act like it Comes naturally
I don't wanna have to split the holidays
I don't want two addresses
I don't want a stepbrother anyways
And I don't want my mom to have to change her last name
In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
We look pretty normal
let's go back to that
In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
Let's play pretend,
act like goes naturally
In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
We look pretty normal
let's go back to that
In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
Let's play pretend, act like it
Comes naturally
(can we work it out)
(can we be a family)
(promise ill be better)
(mom ill do anything)
(can we work it out)
(can we be a family)
(promise ill be betta)
(dady please dont leave)
In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
We look pretty normal
let's go back to that
In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
We look pretty normal
let's go back to that
Daddy don't leave... daddy don't leave
Daddy don't leave
turn around please
remember that the night you left you
took my shining star?
daddy dont...daddy dont leave
daddy dont leave
dont leave us here alone
Mom l'll be nicer
I'll be so much better
I'll tell my brother
I won't spill the milk at dinner
I'll be so much better
I'll do everything right
I'll be your little girl forever
I'll go to sleep at night |