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| anon 2007-10-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseGo Bobby! I really, really love this fic. Bobby is just an awesome character and I can see him managing something like this. Dean saying "Dad?" when Bobby approaches him in his sleep is a really cute little touch. I only have one little quibble; perhaps with future fics it might be a good idea to either capitalize all the words in the title or none of them. I almost didn't read this fic because often (from my experience) fics where the titles aren't properly capitalized tend to involve bad grammar. Obviously that's not the case here, but it is a little off-putting to potential readers. Anyway, that's obviously a very minor suggestion. On the whole, this was a great little fic. Well done! |
| kbpen 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseI love Bobby - your version of him is wonderful. "He'e the quiet one." *loves* |
| Sierra Nichole 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseAmazing! It's about time somebody wrote a good Bobby fic, he's probably the best character on Supernatural right now. I say that, even though I love Sam and Dean to death. But Bobby is just so...kickass, and calm, and realistic, he's awesome. Great job :) ~Sierra |
| Motherlyclucker 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseIt is always the quiet ones, isn't it? Well, this was just awesome, and its going on my favorites list! |
| Linnie McCary 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseFirst, let me thank you for continuing to post here, in addition to LJ. So, thanks, UV! Loved this image: "And what Bobby does, as the chill of dawn leaves small drops on his beard, and the fire consuming what was once Jake and the Demon is reflected in his eyes, is hope. Hope that some of the magic has stayed." It's also where I figured out where you were going, and I loved it even more, then! "And he can see the hesitation and the tenderness and the greed, the need for family in Dean’s face." Jensen does it so well and simply, and you write it so well and simply! Rumsfeld still alive. Dean dreaming of John. Sam with a book. All good. And I love Bobby's determination to be there for them: "Let the boys awaken to...the smell of normal, the smell of a life to be lived." Yay, Bobby! Yay, you! |
| may7fic 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseI know I'd already reviewed this over at your lj but, it's been a little while since reading it and so I couldn't resist giving it another read. This is definitely my favorite "deal breaker" fic and never ceases to amaze me in the brilliance of its simplicity (or is it the other way around?). I just love, love, LOVE this story and am so glad you posted it here for more people to read and appreciate. I can't remember now... did you post it to Singer_Salvage? If not, you really should! God bless Bobby :). |
| AllieMcD 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abusepure awesome, they should so reseract colt bullets, and your bobby is great i love the scene where he asks dean if he trusts him |
| Hazgarn 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuse“Could have fooled me. Cuz from where I’m standing? I’d say you’re screwed.” Love-love-loved this. I'm such a Bobby fan and this was so him. :) |