It's a little trippy, but it's certainly morbid. I suppose in those terms, Syndrome is kind of a hero. Good job, I hope you write more Syndrome fan fiction ^^.

Lone

Wow - very dark!

Can't get enough of this story. So dark and straight up lean writing. Love it.

XOXO
LoTides

This is so f'in creepy. I re-read it about eight times, just to get the full effect. I love it, I love it, I love it.

Lo

Hey, that was really good. I liked it. ^_^

nice touch in the end

I like how short it is. Really disturbing. All and all it's my kind of story. Two thumbs up...

Hm... I'm not too sure what to say about this one. Disturbing, to say the least.

...depressing. 0.o

That's all I can think of to say, though. Sorry. I just got back inside from an hour-and-a-half walk in the heat (though it's cloudy today and not nearly as hot as it usually is) and my brain is fried...

Huh. My explanation was longer than my actual review.

Awwa! That made me sad.

But it was very good.

AUGH. Excellent. You kept surprising me! *hugs Violet*