Wow... Sawyer got shot and died? Talk about drama!

This is quite a possible scenario, given Jack wouldn't be able to intervene just at the right moment this time, to save both Sawyer and Kate.

I'm glad that at least in this chapter, Sawyer seemed to have more of a fighting spirit.

Pickett was well written here, he's got too much underlying anger issues, and Sawyer was the scape goat.

Can't wait for some Jate! Thank you for the update.

You're really working the BE! nice work

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I AM HORRIFIED... that i'm not that upset :O :P

It did seem kind of... right. Cause now, if she can go back, she can know what'll happen so. :D Thats ok then :D

If he's not really really dead, even tho he is... o.O Ok, thats confusing me now.

Oh. Kate's gonna feel so bad! :O Is she still gonna get Jack out? Or is it going back to the realtime beach? :O

*is excited*

*doesn't blame you for killing Sawyer* :P Hehe.

Update son!

xox Katie

I like this. It's sad, that Sawyer is dead, but if it helps Jate, why not. Update soon

Ooh. I'm liking this.

Update soon! xD

I like this idea...:) Please continue

You did the scene exactly how I wished she would progress, but still, well yeah Jack would still be the same I guess.. .great job

So Kate only went back in time to the fateful day in the cage... Of course, this is what she wished to change most, I should have thought of it. :) It's very smart that you didn't change the course of events and only altered the dialogue just by a few nothces. The story title inspires me to look for significance and clues in every little change but they didn't seem to influence Jack's behaviour the slightest so it's all in Kate's hands, isn't it. I fear that now she's defeated enough to actually follow through and sleep with Sawyer, but that's precisely what she so wished to correct. Now she knows Jack's heart belongs to her, but she still mistakes his motivations for dismissing her plea for mistrust while he only did what he had to so the Others don't make /her/ a target.

I love what you made of the Hydra scene, how you put the moving images into words, refining them with giving us an insight into Kate's desperate thoughts. The way Jack's face lit up when he first saw her there was a clearer than day display of love, it was so moving and beautiful (all credit goes to Matthew for this one :)), gets me every time. I'm glad that Kate at least has it sorted that she loves Jack and a part of me wishes she just told him already, but where would the story be going from there. ;) Nothing can be easy for our Kate here, she has to learn and grow up, I believe.

Let's see how she persuades Sawyer to escape now!

It's great, I'm happy, that she came back to the period of time with the cages. I hope, that you erase the horrible Skate scene from this story.

This is so trippy. I love the plot line, because I was so upset when Sawyer and Kate hooked up in the cage. I love that you have a real reason to make that dissapear!

Thank you for the update! While reading the Jack/Kate scene in the Hydra station, I was hoping that as emotionally painful was the scene, that somehow the ending this time for it would be different... but it wasn't. Which is better... because it showed that this part is kind of like 'fate', that as long as the camera was there, and the Others were within earshots, Jack wouldn't give them an inch.

At least this time, it didn't seem like Kate had made a subconscious choice about who she loves, and it didn't give Jack the impression that she was doing it all just for Sawyer, instead, it was to keep all of them safe.

I always loved the expression Jack had shown when he first saw Kate in that Hydra scene... it was just full of relief that she was alright, and full of love/concern :) So I'm glad you've revisited this importance scene, without taking away the best bits ;)

Can't wait to see how she could change the past, and to see the repercussions. Thank you for the great story so far!

Love it!

Aha!

There not gonna sleep together are they? :( LOL. Its a Jate fic right?

*rolls eyes* Even tho i swear she loved him for that moment in the cages ;) SORRY... ok, i really am turning the Skate off NOW.

Ok. Done.

Oh Jack shoulda believed her, although i probably wouldn't! :P

especially after all her attempts to manipulate him in the past- Meh... She has done it quite a bit hasn't she? :P But in a nice way... nice manipulative way ;)

PLEASE don't kill Sawyer! PLEASE don't! :O You MUSTN'T. He makes Jate stories SO much more interesting, even if its not in a romance, temptation whatevr kinda way.

DON'T KILL SAWYER! LOL :P

And ooh! Can't wait to see what happens next ;)

Anyway, great chapter ;) Update son!

xox Katie

Thank you for the 'workaholic' ethics, so I'm plesantly surprised to find this new fic of yours so soon :)

This chapter is a great beginning to a very intriguing story!

I like how in the beginning, Kate seemed to really miss the 'old days' with Jack, she really misses the times she spent with him. And now seeing him spending time with Juliet, it kills her deep down, but she really didn't have anyone else to blame, except herself.

Middle part of the chapter was great, full of mystery and adventure when she ventured off into the unknown alone. When she fell into the waters, and had a minor black out, I thought she would wake up in a complete different world, going back into her past or something... but that didn't happen. Good thing Desmond saved her! That means he's been having 'flashes' of the future about Kate? Will we find out what it was?

I love how Jack took care of Kate, that although on the surface it seems he was upset and wanted to give her lectures, but his actions was speaking of gentleness and love :)

Thank you for the first chapter! Can't wait for more updates!

Cool concept. It'll be interesting to see where it gos. Great start, keep it up hon :D