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| whiteinu1 2008-06-23 ch 10, | abuseI love the E/M stories u write, Keep going ^-^ |
| Felides quod Filidates 2008-05-30 ch 10, | abuseI loved Loved LOVED it! I don't know who i should hug more you are mecuryadept92 oh who care three-way hug. your style of writeing never, ever, gets old and your stroy plots are amazing please ive my thanks to those imfamous plot bunnies of yours and ask if they wont help me a bit. oh while i was reading the bit about Morzan and Selena bit in chapter 9 and the song 'Torn' by Natilie Imbruglia came straight into my head, please listen to it and tell me if my imagination is way off and i'll talk to it lol any congrats on another splendid story, never stop writeing and I'll love you always |
| RoseMoonHarvestSky 2008-03-16 ch 10, | abusethats so sweet! its a fairytale ending, drama, heartbreak, and in the end its all hapily ever after! you are such an amazing author, keep on writing amzingly, may many fans stalk you for your work. |
| Kiheada.Ray.T. 2007-12-28 ch 10, | abuseNO! *sniffs* I wanted some action...wa Agon: *sweatdrop* Murtagh: *rofl* Me: what? I thought there was going to be more! POST A SEQUEL! SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL! |
| la-ptite-fee-clochette 2007-12-26 ch 10, | abuseOw I am the 101° review ! XD I know, who cares ? Me... ^^ So... I've just finished your story, yesterday in fact, before one of Drowned Hopes. I saw you like this author too. In fact, her and you are both of my 4 favorite EraMur author ! XD Well. I speak for nothing. Erk. ^^ I love your story. From the beginning, to the end. What can I say which will please you ? ^^ I was not very found of AU at the beginning but thanks to Drowned Hopes and you, I've changed my mind, and for the better ! I was lucky to find your stories. Imagine if I've read some awful AU... But it didn't happen. I hardly imagined Saphira and Thorn as human and know, I can't help but see them as humans, actually. XD Saphira as a blonde tall girl with shiny blue eyes... She's so beautiful in my mind !! And Thorn... ow about him ! I LOVED the scene with Murtagh, when he... "comforts" him, and after that, they friendly fight. Ow Murtagh's so ticklish, so cute... ^^ I loved this scene, yeah. I've got my favorites ones, you see ? I loved... a lot of things, in fact ! * The relationship between the 6 teens. It was adorable. I want friends like them ! * Selena. I miss her in the books. She must have been a beautiful and sweet mother I'm sure. In your story, she's so funny and cute ! And very tolerant... o.Ô Some adults actually behave as children. As Morzan, you see. You depicted him very well. * The moment when Murtagh and Eragon understand that they're brothers. I was like them, I suppose. Shaking slowly my head, like "nonono, that's impossible, please..." ^^ * You made me cry when Eragon thinks about his feelings. His loneliness despite his friends who're here. And the way he's hurt when he understands that Murtagh and him can be friends again but... not as before. I love the end of the scene at lunch, when he stands up and says he goes to the library. Dunno why. It's just so sad for him... * All the interactions between Murtagh and Eragon, of course ! The ones which are funny, the ones more sad... All were very real and I loved them. You made a great job, in fact. You were never OOC. I thought it was impossible in UA... So I was wrong and I admit it. *big smile* It was very real... You express real feelings, with real problems. I mean... You didn't write "okay they're brothers but never mind, they're in love, so they're happy", no and thank you for that. You made the 2 brothers ask themselves about their feelings, you made the reactions of the others people around them, you asked a lot of questions about a very sensitive subject... So that was great. What can I say ? ^^ Thank you, just thank you, for your words... I enjoyed it so much, you can't imagine... I hope you'll have a lovely and happy new year's day... XD Bisous, Clo |
| rizenmad 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseFelt tempted to make the review mark reach 100, that's all. P.S Yay! You finished! I'm so jealous of your awesome summaries...I can't write like that on the price of my life. Write another! |
| mercuryadept92 2007-12-24 ch 10, | abuseSk And so it's over. I think I'm going to cry. I'm just joking. I loved it. Every last written word of this fanfic. I loved it all. And the ending is fine. It didn't feel rushed at all. It ends everything so beautifully. Eragon and Murtagh are finally tgether again and I love the part with Thorn at the end when they call him a traitor. I can't wait to see something else you write. I'm so happy you wrote this for me and that we got to meet. I can't wait to see what else comes out under your name. You are an awesome writer. Mercury |
| mercuryadept92 2007-12-24 ch 9, | abuseSK Another well written chapter. I'm sorry I didn't review earlier, but during finals week my Internet crashed and we just got it back today. Not a bad Christmas present I guess. Eragon and Murtagh finaly got to talk! They're not through with their issues but they'll get there. I liked they ended. It makes you go "Aw...". It's great Eragon can talk to his Mom and all of his frends. I'm going on to read the final chapter now. Mercury |
| Spottedstar106 2007-12-21 ch 10, | abuseIts over? (Cries single tear) Oh well, ever good thing must come to an end, I guess. Ah, who am I kidding? THAT WAS AMAZING! This is DEFENANTLY going on my favorites, author alert, etc. :D Spottedstar, leader of windclan |
| dragonrider713 2007-12-21 ch 10, | abuseIt's over? NO! *cries* I was already imagining what they were doing to make the neighbors angry before you even said anything about it, but you probably could've figured that out on your own. ^_^ I still wanna kill Morzan. Told you I wouldn't change my mind! XD This story was great, and I'm gonna miss looking forard to the next chapters. I hope you post something soon! Luv always, DR |
| Wolflady13 2007-12-21 ch 10, | abuseI love your whole story and u explained the ending very well. I have to admit though that i'm dissapointed it's over. I miss the e-mails saying this story had a new chapter. Oh well now that this is over I'll start checking out ur other stories. |
| Blacktangledheart92 2007-12-21 ch 10, | abuseYey! What a happy ending. I loved it all. I can't wait to read more of your fics. Thank you once again |
| black-venom-heart 2007-12-21 ch 10, | abuseThat was a nice ending and I really enjoyed ur story. I'm glad everything worked out between the boys. |
| kolachess 2007-12-20 ch 10, | abuseomg! Ur amazing! This story was amazing. Loved it so much. Wish there was a sequel. GASPS. there should be a sequel! School troubles! TeacherxStudent relationship omg! That'd be amazing. Loved it. Heart it a tons. |
| Tears Falling Freely 2007-12-20 ch 10, | abuseOMG, wonderfully fantastic. It's bittersweet that its the end but I'm also happy that it ended with them together, finally. :) I'm also really looking forward to the continuation of the Dark series, I really love what you have so far. I'll enjoy your future stories immensely. |