nice!

update soon please!

this is a pretty cool story but i didnt get this chapter.

LOL the end.

That was really good, but it somewhat confused me a bit.

-giggles- Oh very nice chapter. I liked all of them really. I especially liked how you twisted RuroKen into this. Very clever. XD

-rereads- hehehe, poor Saito. I kinda sorta almost feel sorry for him. But not quite.

Well, that was different from my usual action-orientated schedule.

Good job though. I liked that Kazuki and Tokiko named their daught Tomoe in the earlier chapters.

Oh, how little they know... ;P

Please keep writing!

Hooray! I love Buso Renkin but good stories are hard to find... Although there's only like... 30 to choose from... But anyway, you should write a longer length fic, I like your writing style as well... Anywho, good job on the story!

Quite novel, I wonder if this is the first time someone has made a story featuring the characters of Buso Renkin as descendants of character's in Rorouni Kenshin. The author does make some jokes in the manga about how some of the Buso Renkin characters look similar to Kenshin characters.

Scene breaks to indicate the passage of time would have been helpful here as one moment they are observing Tokiko and Kazuki meeting for the first time then the next we see their first kiss, and it is written as if it all occured in a few minutes. Though of course time in Heaven could be relative.

Here's hoping you get more reviews.

Wow, that was fast! And while I'm flattered with you using my ideas and I know drabbles are meant to be fairly short I hope you'll take my advice for adding in a bit more length and detail. It may take longer to write stories that way but I think its well worth it. Without it the chapter can feel a bit rushed if you get my drift.

Though in my case it unfortunately can take months for me to be satisfied with a story I'm writing to the point that I now don't post a chapter until the story is all but done. Which translated in me only releasing one fanfic in the past couple of years as most I start I have yet to get inspired enough to finish.

Here's hoping you get more reviews. It can be tough with series with limited fanbases like this but the reviews you do get can be more meaningful.

Nice, though even being drabbles I wish they were a bit longer, though the chapter on Kazuki's birthday seemed a bit unbelievable because it happened in public. For this chapter the "being on top" line was hilarious. Tokiko does strike one as a girl who would be very aggressive and dominating when alone with her love but shy about showing affection when in public.

As for future drabble ideas, you could always go for jokes involving Tokiko's "I'll rip out your guts!" catchphrase/battle cry.

Or for more serious and romantic maybe something with Kazuki pointing out how he thinks Tokiko's scar is beautiful, because it shows how strong she is despite the bad memories it carries. I haven't read the whole series yet so I don't know if he has already said something like this.

Or if you want to go for more lemonish but cute things you could have a intimate scene with Kazuki and Tokiko kissing in bed, Kazuki perhaps paying special attention to her belly button. *blushes*

Adorable, really. I love Tokiko's mood swings, I find that funny as all get out

cute!

sardines and peanut butter, that's hiliarious.

This chapter was adorable

I think this is the best writing you've ever done. From a technical standpoint the grammar and spelling were tight and there were no rushed paragraphs.

From a story standpoint the way you got the one-shots to stand alone while still linking slightly worked well. Also: Hormonal Tokiko and "Green Veggie Bug" were really funny.