cool little poems!

this poem touched me deep inside my soul where the most burned peice of toast never shall reach. huzzah huzzah.

hey corky, nice work here...we should ban together and write a fan fiction novel based on harry potter. peace out yo.

umm.. odd but i like it.. would go good with bongos =)

They're ok...ummm...i guess....

These are good.

Wow, that was special. Amusing, though.

Heh. I like the first one. Nice little example of a by-the-book diamonte there. (Or is it diamante?) I remember taking a little poetry course in seventh grade; I loved writing those things. Now I can barely remember how. But, I do remember that the second half is supposed to be the opposite of the first - funny how well that worked out for you, ain't it? ;)