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TKo
2009-04-09 . chapter 1
This story made me cry, which fanfiction rarely does. It is perhaps the most beautiful story about Andromeda I have every read. Simply stunning.
Tassel630
2008-06-07 . chapter 1
Whoops. About saying 'update soon' in my review, for some reason it copied that over from my last review before that. Whatever, didn't mean to say that. Anyway, feel free to delete this non-review.
Tassel630
2008-06-06 . chapter 1
Holy... crud... Amazed by it's good-ness... I ADORE the play-on-words in the first... thingy. "You see, Nymphadora Tonks’s eyes belong to Black, and can never be done justice in any other colour." Wow.
Good job, I'm glad you'll be updating soon! (Hint, hint.)
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-The Stupid Crazy Insane Idiotic Weirdo known as Tassel630
-Please don't respond to this review-
Fleur JulizzeD
2008-06-04 . chapter 1
Very poetic. Its sad to think of all the things that probaly happened to Dromeda in her life. Her fmaily disowned her, she probaly lived in fear that Bellatrix (and the rest of the dark side) would come after her. Then she had to lose her husband and daughter.
Mary Gooby
2008-01-12 . chapter 1
I'm reviewing, ok? Great story.
rye-the-random
2007-12-30 . chapter 1
No! No, damn you Huffle! Thanks for making me c-cr-cry! *sobs*

Siriusly, this was beautiful and I didn't even mind the R/T, it was so good and made me cry and OH.

*cries* Favourites!
BlackBerge
2007-12-21 . chapter 1
This is sweet and sad. I love Andromeda and Tonks and think that this story protrays both of there carricters beautifuly. Great story.
ChrissyWhissy
2007-12-02 . chapter 1
This is lovely... Really sad, that last part. Got my eyes a little damp. Loved it!
Demoiselle Kyota
2007-11-27 . chapter 1
Oh. My. Gosh. That was so sad! I loved the last line especially; it was the perfect way to end it.

...Can you tell the gang of fanfic writers not to clobber me now? XD
xRosePetalx
2007-11-25 . chapter 1
Wow. That was so good. I love how you characterized Andromeda and tied together all the vignettes with the common theme of fear. It was bonechillingly good.
Gaby Black
2007-11-22 . chapter 1
This was really good! I liked that line:

It scares Andromeda sometimes to look into Dora’s eyes because they once belonged to a sister she lost and a cousin she thought she knew.

And you also explain why Andromeda didn't join the Order. Good job!
- Gaby
Heptagon
2007-11-13 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Poor Andromeda. I loved all these four parts, can't really pick one over all the others. I loved the part of Andromeda thinking that Tonks' eyes have to be black, that no other colour suits them, and how they sometimes scare her because of the others that had same look in their eyes, and were both taken from her by the evil; and the scene in the end where Andromeda lets Tonks go, knowing in her mother-heart that she will never see her daughter again - that was so emotional. But I do love the middle parts as well, how Andromeda can't stop worrying, even though everything is fine, but she simply can't stop worrying. And then how all her fears come true, and there's nothing she can do to keep her family safe.

Sad, oh so sad. But very beautifully written.
RingWarriorAzec 1809
2007-11-02 . chapter 1
Can i join that gang? I have an old keyboard I could use!

This is great. It's really well written and I love the way you portray Andromeda and Nymph's relationship.

Well Done. Please continue writing more like it.
xLupinxLoverx
2007-10-27 . chapter 1
This is beautiful...I cant think of other words to describe it

Lets just leave it at that ;)
Glorious Clio
2007-10-22 . chapter 1
What do you mean, least favorite? I'll have you know that I'm crying now. Thank you for a wonderful story!
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