cute and sweet

aha, cute.

Very sweet, I loved it!

I really loved this:D
it was interesting and cute lol=D
write more whenever you can!


-KRissyLOVEforever

AW!that is SO cute!i loved it!keep writing!ur good at it!

cool

so cute and...ah! i loved it, great job :)

A little fluff never hurt anyone. good job.

hehehe i loved it! hehe it was cool :) keep writin!!

Aw that is so cute! Good job!

aw, romantic and hot, it's perfect!

Aw..that was sweet! Way to short but still very sweet! Great job I really liked it!

utterly and completly cute.

This could have been longer. I liked the top, you could have had fun and added more details, but the end was just boring. There was no pizaz or anything. Add more details and put some laughs in there.

that was good I liked it, but I can't see Bella being so cool with Edward in the bathroom with her like that, unless they were married? but it was good ;p