hi adngo! are you ever going to update this story? i think its pretty cool! you should have a few filler chapters now though about nanime and hinata when they were first married. make the 2 or 3 chapters like fluff and lemons about how they grew closer after the change and maybe have a prego hinata/nanime lemon (major yuri nosebleed). after that maybe you should have one of the akatsuki go after nanime and hinata since you never specifically mentioned them being destroyed (like say fighting leftovers). you could also have the kyuubi come back and visit nanime since all that would have happened is kyuubi going back to her realm (demons can't die you know)

funny

I know your story is based on humor and I take this into account but i want to suggest you take a look at your dialoge your characters are coming off as robotic but if you are going with that as a part of your story that would make sense. FYI- I try to put all aspects and posibilities into consideration, so if I come across as an ** that is by an accidental error

man i don't how you came up with this story or what you are smoking but what ever it is i take double of it, i mean is funny and crazy to crazy for me, but i like it any ways and if you post more chapters of it i will read it, and please send same of what ever you are smoking it have to be really good to make you think of stores like this one.

...I really should finish reading this but neither you nor anyone else is ever going to come up with anything better than...

"...and also, your daughter is bisexual.”

‘Damn, now my plans are ruined.’

Zeke out.

lol, the v-day thing was cute. nice chapter.

Nice valentine gifts from our favorite couple! Naruto's addition to the bridge was great, pure him! I can't wait to see the romance of Pinky and Tenji evolve!

lol namine and hinata had the same idea. lol team 1 battled vegeta and trunks lmao this seems to be a DBZ cross over a little.
anywho cant wait for the next chapter plz update soon

hehehe tenji knows pinky's secret cant wait for the next chapter plz update soon

Sorry, my creativity is at a low point due to my new job. I can't really think of names at the moment.

Nice chapter, I can't wait to see how Pinky and Tenji's gender situations resolve themselves. Namine's solution to paperwork was great!

*laughs* the end to this chapter was so great! lol!

lol she just took off while still naked. cant wait for the next chapter plz update soon

Good crack, very good crack! I can't wait to see more!

This is good crack! Keep making it!

ok...i think i need help. i don;t think i quite understand it fully. so pinky is a guy but dresses like a girl? and tenji is a girl who dresses like a guy? right?