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tomorrow4eva
2009-07-12 . chapter 8
Ah, conspiracies. :) Nice to see an update, especially one that starts painting a wider plot arc! Poor Dimitri. Enjoyed teh chapter!
Carmilla DeWinter
2009-07-09 . chapter 8
This is certainly an interesting development, and didn't go into the direction I thought it would (which is good).

At any rate, I'm thoroughly fascinated and will be on the lookout for more.
SpartanCommander
2009-07-09 . chapter 8
You know I still wonder just how many Decepticons are left on earth with pilots.

I now the insecticons are pilotless and living in the Amazon. According to the Marvel comic SHockwave and the Dinobots are buiried under a collapsed mountain durring the Age of the Dinosaurs. And their in a form of shutdown that will automatically bring them back online wonce the right conditions are met.

I just wonder how long it will be for the unenslaved Decepticons and Autobots to be discovered and then create a new problem.

I would say I agree that their is onthing to gain for the humans. Unless their is a small faction in the organization itself that has it's own adgenda for an insane plan to turn their entire race into those combat mashines to soldidify their hold on that world...Boy that's a really big problem and not likely to succeed but the way everything is conducting it's almost like they are looking for something on the planet they they don't know where it is. They maybe looking for the Nemisis. It's likely that ship is still somewhere on the planet and is undiscovered and they are hoping that by following to these attacks they will find another group of deactivated aliens to enslave for their own purposes.

Also considering that the Matrix can also bring life and revive transformers I can picture Eliza putting here hand on her alarm clock when she's half asleep and not knowing how but unleashing a small amount of the Matrix energy and actually bringing the alarm clock to life and it turns into a very small version of a Transformer looking a little like a rat. Then it makes a squeeking noise and scurries into the air ducts. I can picture just what would go through her mind with that.

Since the Matrix is a power that it not fully comprehended she is likley to occasionally and inadvertantly access those powers.

I also wonder if the Casseetts with show up. Considering Soundwave is likely here they are likely not far behind.
tomorrow4eva
2008-10-26 . chapter 7
The whole Bluestreak parallel was pretty eerie. I like how your characters aren't perfect, but it looks like they'll grow. Watching character development really makes a story more fun. Eliza is already growing somewhat. Jason & Sunstreaker's interaction might just make Sunstreaker grow up some too, whereas Prowl will hopefully have a beneficial influence on helping Amelia deal with her power issues. Good fun! Always happy to see a new chapter. :) Really enjoyed this one.
SpartanCommander
2008-10-25 . chapter 7
Interesting chapter.

he new member is probably going to be interesting.

For some reason I'm not entirly sure about the reasons for the recon for survivor's duty for the mech's. Normally that would be the job for fully equiped search and rescue personel and not a bunch of kids in mech's. That mission sound's a little foney and I think that their leadership had an ulterior motive for this task.

I dought that the Decepticons voluntairly destoryed the city. Their is little tactical reason for that unless they had no choice or the Decepticons were attempted to reach something hidden in the city and some sort of safety measure went off. Megatron may be ruthless but he doesn't destory stuff with out a good reason. He's not tactically blind. I think that if the Decepticons had something to do with all that destruction their must have been a reason for it. Something really smells fishy about that. It's also possible that the government want's to hide the truth of the insadent and that could explain why they sent such a small force filled with kids that they always kept under close observation.

I wonder just what the Decepticons have in mind so far nothingseems to have to much of a strategy yet. It' almost like the Decetpicons aren't entirly free yet. Or the Decepticons are trying to locate any of their fofrces that the governmen has in hiding by forcing them to be used.

You know it would go well with that strategy if they had Dead End and they found a Kid that was just as dreary as him. He could easily fall in line with the Decepticons with out any druges.
Carebear1
2008-10-24 . chapter 7
It's nice to see Bluestreak is here too! I think those two will be good for one another in the long run.

(I bought a car 3 weeks ago that I named Bluestreak. If it were really him, he'd be pissed at the way I drive him!)
Fae Child19
2008-07-03 . chapter 6
Love the fact that she can now hear all of the others! Terrific chapter!
SpartanCommander
2008-07-01 . chapter 6
Boy I know the effects the matrix has on a human is somewhat strange. I know that when it was merged with Wickly he kept having a few strange tendancies, not to mention he instinctivly knew how to repair anything and how anything mechanical worked. He could even disassemble mechanical and robotic stuff with his mind and reassemble them and give it life. That means that girl would give life to a mashine by accident.

I also know that the matrix did alter starscream's personality in the G2 comic. It wasn't enough to completly change his persoonality but it was enough to make Starscream to act more selfless and noble than he normally does.

It would be really cool if uncontroled Autobots and Decepticon groups woke up on Earth and started to attempt to recover their falled comrades.
tomorrow4eva
2008-06-29 . chapter 6
Interesting developments with the Matrix there. Having a Decepticon partner doesn't sound like a lot of fun (mind you, Screamer is probably one of the worst ones you could have). Enjoyed the chapter!
Psionic Star
2008-06-29 . chapter 6
i like it, though you should update more often. it's very interesting
Carmilla DeWinter
2008-04-04 . chapter 5
Heh, an update, and a good one at that. And an old friend piloting Starscream - I really don't know who I'm more sorry for.

I like how you're doing Prime's voice in Eliza's head.
tomorrow4eva
2008-03-30 . chapter 5
Whoa. Unconsciousness seems to be her best friend. So, did the children that got picked get picked because their personalities matched their Autobot, or does that come in time? Prowl/Amelia will have kittens.
Onlysomeofthetime
2008-03-28 . chapter 5
Damn you woman! You keep me waiting for this long and then you leave me with another cliffhanger! Anyway, spectacular update lol. I find it so hilariously ironic that Jacobs smokes. Doctors make the worst patients, I suppose. And yay for bringing Starscream in! I'm excited to see where this is going!
SpartanCommander
2008-03-28 . chapter 5
boy this is getting interesting. The Pilot of Starscream is the best friend of Eliza.

All things considered Starscream is probably the second most skilled warrior in the Decepticon ranks even though he not the most powerful. Looking through the G1 comics Starscream actually (once megatron temporarily blanked out his memory) Defeaded the majority of a Autobot and Decepticon squad lead by Scorpinoc and Optimus Prime, Starscream almost terminated the two just before his memeories returned and he did't know why he was in this fight to begin with and thus opted for the fastest way out pleading for mercy (If you ask me I'm not entirly sure if Starscream is as much of a coward as everyone thinks he only seems to have fears and some hampering in cobat when he's on the ground I guess Starscream is uncomfortable when fighting on the ground and prefers to attack in the air by hovering or strafing. Also I found out that the comic revealed that Starscream is physically weaker, packs less firepower, and less armored than Scorpinoc when he was grabbed by Scorpinoc in one issue.

Boy I can just imagin both of them becomming powermasters out of this mess and that would actually mean that the fairs of the Powermasters are bounded to the pilots. I found out that if the Cybertonian is actuall killed the master suffers from a mental breakdown. However it is restored once the Cybertonian is revived. Thus Eliza will have a problem with combating another powermaster especially if it's her best friend. (Starscream may have a little troube if his partner becomes a powermaster because he would also be somewhat affected by his partner's personality, even though he would enjoy the increase in firepower, speed, and strength a Powermaster would provide.

If would be fun though for shockwave to show up. His powers and strengths actually rival that of Megatron.



You know in the G2 comic Starscream actually was forced to do something nobel. In the G2 it also showed a forth Cybertonian faction aside from the Autobots, Decepticons, and empties. The Cybertonian Empire an offshute of their race that views all life that isn't transformer doesn't deserve to exist. The result was an ememy so dangerous a resurected and rebuilt Megatron and Optimus Prime actually agreed to an alliance to stop this rouge group of their "family tree". The Decepticon actually saved the Autobot forces in an issue of that new war.
Elita One
2008-03-28 . chapter 5
ohh man whats gonna happen next
update soon pwease
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