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David Fishwick
2009-05-10 . chapter 1
Excellent idea and thanks for writing.
NevemTeve
2008-12-12 . chapter 1
Hey that was bittersweet... I guess I'm going to cry a bit... poor Neville
mustardgirl1128
2008-07-08 . chapter 1
I loved this! I loved the intimacy between Luna and Dean, and Neville and Parvati going out, and the Witch Weekly thing, and the changes to Hogwarts, and the Blaise conversation! =D Great job!
painted.inkblot
2008-04-02 . chapter 1
Great and realistic portrayal of the "eight years" after the war, and of Neville, too. I enjoyed it all throughout.
RubeusHagrid34
2007-12-24 . chapter 1
that was lovely :)

well done!
MellaBrooke
2007-10-26 . chapter 1
This story is amazingly well written. It's just -- I'm sad for Neville.

But you did a brilliant job. :)
KDSanders
2007-10-26 . chapter 1
"Luna’s face was turned towards Dean’s as a sunflower towards the sun." That is such a beautiful line. I saw your story on the Sugarquill new author submission thread. You are very talented. I love the way you characterize Neville.

Also, the jobs everyone finds after school are right on.

It would be nice to see this as a chapter fic, are you planning on continueing it?
Moonprincess92
2007-10-20 . chapter 1
Very very well done. I little confusing, but that's just because i'm slow. my word of advice-sepperate long paragrphs, as it'll make it easier for people to read, and encourage more people to read. I almost clicked out of this story as it was a little over-whelming for me to see so many words piled together.

But other than that, it was awsome. Lun'a sawsome, the stories awsome ... yeah. Shot! = D
Sim9008
2007-10-15 . chapter 1
Holy crap, that was completely amazing! I don't like the idea of Dean/Luna at all, but I suppose he's better than, say, Rolf? I really do hope you update soon! NEVILLE/LUNA ALL THE WAY!
Possum132
2007-10-15 . chapter 1
Believable look at the survivors, a year after the end of the war. I'm happy for Luna, and sad for Neville.
Victoria to Worthing
2007-10-14 . chapter 1
Are you sure there isn't going to be more to this? I hoped that there was and then saw the "Complete." Dang!

The parts with the Witch Weekly interviews were hilarious. They were what made me feel that I had to review this story. It seemed like you did a good job getting inside of Neville's head, too. It was all around really well-done, and I wish there was more of it!
Meggily
2007-10-14 . chapter 1
Aww, Neville!
This was really sad and sweet at the same time.
I really liked it.
Fabulous job.
:-)
fledge
2007-10-14 . chapter 1
Beautiful and sad story, very much in tune with Neville's character. But really, you ought to do something to put him out of his misery!
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