 David Fishwick 2009-05-10 . chapter 1Excellent idea and thanks for writing. |
 NevemTeve 2008-12-12 . chapter 1Hey that was bittersweet... I guess I'm going to cry a bit... poor Neville |
 mustardgirl1128 2008-07-08 . chapter 1I loved this! I loved the intimacy between Luna and Dean, and Neville and Parvati going out, and the Witch Weekly thing, and the changes to Hogwarts, and the Blaise conversation! =D Great job! |
 painted.inkblot 2008-04-02 . chapter 1Great and realistic portrayal of the "eight years" after the war, and of Neville, too. I enjoyed it all throughout. |
 RubeusHagrid34 2007-12-24 . chapter 1that was lovely :)
well done! |
 MellaBrooke 2007-10-26 . chapter 1This story is amazingly well written. It's just -- I'm sad for Neville.
But you did a brilliant job. :) |
 KDSanders 2007-10-26 . chapter 1"Luna’s face was turned towards Dean’s as a sunflower towards the sun." That is such a beautiful line. I saw your story on the Sugarquill new author submission thread. You are very talented. I love the way you characterize Neville.
Also, the jobs everyone finds after school are right on.
It would be nice to see this as a chapter fic, are you planning on continueing it? |
 Moonprincess92 2007-10-20 . chapter 1Very very well done. I little confusing, but that's just because i'm slow. my word of advice-sepperate long paragrphs, as it'll make it easier for people to read, and encourage more people to read. I almost clicked out of this story as it was a little over-whelming for me to see so many words piled together.
But other than that, it was awsome. Lun'a sawsome, the stories awsome ... yeah. Shot! = D |
 Sim9008 2007-10-15 . chapter 1Holy crap, that was completely amazing! I don't like the idea of Dean/Luna at all, but I suppose he's better than, say, Rolf? I really do hope you update soon! NEVILLE/LUNA ALL THE WAY! |
 Possum132 2007-10-15 . chapter 1Believable look at the survivors, a year after the end of the war. I'm happy for Luna, and sad for Neville. |
 Victoria to Worthing 2007-10-14 . chapter 1Are you sure there isn't going to be more to this? I hoped that there was and then saw the "Complete." Dang!
The parts with the Witch Weekly interviews were hilarious. They were what made me feel that I had to review this story. It seemed like you did a good job getting inside of Neville's head, too. It was all around really well-done, and I wish there was more of it! |
 Meggily 2007-10-14 . chapter 1Aww, Neville!
This was really sad and sweet at the same time.
I really liked it.
Fabulous job.
:-) |
 fledge 2007-10-14 . chapter 1Beautiful and sad story, very much in tune with Neville's character. But really, you ought to do something to put him out of his misery! |