|Reviews for One After 909|
| lovelylittleflowerchild 3/31/11 . chapter 1
I really like this. The time keeping element gives it a littls something extra. Good job! :3
| CrazyCatie 4/7/10 . chapter 1
LOVE THAT TO DEATH! and how special to be the first ever ATU story published!
| Bookish0278 4/30/08 . chapter 1
THIS IS REALLY GOOD! I like the numbers, and it makes it seem- more emotional, and Lucy seems more feeling. This is good!
| they're only words 1/14/08 . chapter 1
| TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 12/30/07 . chapter 1
Great job. Very well written, and very Lucy.
And I totally identify with her. I do that all the time, counting days.
Mm...that was great.
| Addicted to Antics 11/11/07 . chapter 1
That was wonderful! Great way to work in a great song.
| Trekkie S. Monster 10/28/07 . chapter 1
This is so deep, it actually made me sympathize with Lucy (which I definitely didn't during the movie). I'm having trouble arranging my thoughts, but here you go: Really good story, emotional and powerful. XD
| lady anjanette de fleur 10/27/07 . chapter 1
This is really, really good. I love the way you wrote it, and I love how you capture Lucy's conflict and personality.
| Mrs. James Harold Potter 10/16/07 . chapter 1
How purely beautiful! I adored the way you took breaks in between the different parts of her life. I found it interesting the way that she counted down and up to different things, you know? I adore your writing style-actually everything about it.
"1 rooftop away from happiness and the 909 hours since her phone call to Mr. Hubert melt into nothing.
All she needs is love." What a nice way to end the story. Its a reverse perspective, seeing where Lucy's mindset was at the beginning of the story, then back to what it was by the end of it...you know what I mean? You are an extreemly talented writer. Keep up the amaazingly gorgeous work!
XOXO Mrs. James Harold Potter
(PS: I wrote some Lucy/Jude stories as well! And join our Across the Universe Community-we share stories!)
| ginnyharryxox 10/15/07 . chapter 1
amazing. I loved it. :)