hahahaha ahh alex you are so silly. i mean axel. yahh yah axel i i got it memorized NOW.

i so loved this haha it was so funny and axel, every story i read his character i just so funny and amazing haha and you did well to keep him in character. loved this and tommorow when i'm not dying from sleepyness i shall read your other kairel.

wolfie

this was utter amazingness!
you are probably one of the few writers in the universe who can pull of 2nd p.o.v.
honestly
that was fantastic!
great job!!

Omigod. I stumbled upon this... somehow (I can't remember how anymore) but I'll be damned if it wasn't adorable and holy shit, the entire like... first part in the bar had me laughing. It was just very REAL, and it's definately one of those things that most people experience at least once (going to wave and then trying to make it seem like you're messing with your hair XD) and it was just adorable.

I normally don't like second-person but this was absolutely smooth and I honestly didn't realize it was second-person until I read the reviews and was like "... OMIGOD." and did a double-take to reread it.

You have an awesome writing style!

For some reason the idea of Kairi driving that kind of car cracks me up. O__O

Anyway, great job!

OMG! I abosolutely LOVE the line "Got it memorized?" i LOVE it! I dont know why i love it so much, but i do!

Lol. Nice on adding the corny catchphrase at the end xD.

ahaha
hilarious!
and love the trademark quote :]

:o
Wow!
I love this to itsy-bitsy pieces with sprinkled sugar and cherries and cookie-bits and stuff.
Yeah, like that.
It's soo cuute ~squee
I love the ending, it made me want to go in the back of someone's car just for the sake of saying "Uh, this is going to be a really long story."

lamie xx

Awesomish Kaixel! Yey for Kairxel. I'm starting to love it alot now, so yeah, bow down when ever Kaixel is ever mentioned..

OH. MY. GOD.

This was adorable! And great! Squee~!

I loved the second person. It was nearly first person. It's rare to see someone write like that. Whenever I write in second person, it's always all... weird. But this sounded so natural! And funny. Omg. I loved Axel in this. Lovelovelove. And Kairi and Yuffie's friendship? Yay! Axel-arse-kicking! x3

"What if she can smell you or something really weird like that?"

HAHAHA. Axel must smell pretty bad, right?

AERITH! Lol. That was funny.

..Archibald. Oh, God.

"You have to give her some credit. At least she has the correct letters."

x3

I love the last line!

Too good to be true! :D

This is so full of awesome pwningness.

“Oh, this is your car? I must have read the license plate wrong or something…”

XD LOL. Axel made me smile.

//akemi-chan//

*glormps* MADE OF CUTE. :D

You're going to make me like this pairing. DX Arrg.

I LUFFS JOO.

Lolx, this was so kyutt!
Especially when he hid inside her car.
That was truly creative.
Kaixel's smexy!
xD
Lovely piece!

[angie-chan]

lol wow that was awesome! Great story flow and very funny! Also I really like how original it was. Most people would make Axel the 'king of the school uber smex god' and junk like that.

And the fact that they couldn't even get his name right...that was classic. The rhyme was a very nice touch.

Excellent story

-Snap

QWEJIL;WETUJPIWRJHIOWLGYJHWERG.
YOU WIN MAH HEART.
AND ALL THE OTHER ORGANS IN ME.
OMFG. OMFG. OMFG.
LOREN YOU ARE LIKE
TEH MOST AMAZING AXEL WRITER EVER.
like i wanna be all harsh but i can't
IT WAS TOO AMAZING.
like OMFG BECAUSE I CAN'T BREATH
and what was ur prompt again
BECAUSE IT WAS SO LMAO ROFL LAWLS
GOODNESS THIS MAKES ME HAPPIE :D
OMFG. HOLY FUCKING FROG LEGS.
IT WAS JUST SO BAM IN MAI FACE.
lovelovelovelovelove.
amazinglovelycrazylmaofuniquely
AND YUFFIE YAY.


-brain implosions-


-ana