Such a wonderful and cute story!

I found the epilogue a bit sad, since Crystal is alone again after that adventure and some friendships didn't survive the robots return to normal size. Yet at the same time, I'm glad you didn't give her a perfect happy end, it's more realistic this way. I'd like to believe that at least her friendship with Jazz survives and that Prowl and her will regain their old familiarity once Crystal has adjusted to her mini friends suddenly being maxi sized.

"What was I thinking!?"
LOL!

i want to make a stamp for DA out of Grimlock's comment about Ben Affleck movies.
I seriously didn't stop laughing for a whole minute XDXDXD
Oh this is the first review ive posted of this, and i haven't finished, and i'll probably end up writing another, but DUDE. THIS IS AWESOME. i am officially hooked *goes to eat up the rest of this delicious piece of writing*.

O.O I JUST realized something - when she says a change in the routine, she means adding their interaction w/ her after they get put back to normal, and the 'big change/decision' in the next six months is when she gets shot and he puts her in the robot body, isn't it?

whoo! gotta love the safety dance! lovin the story so far babe, i love the pic that goes with it too

I am in truly in love with this story. It is was so cute and adorable and I just wanted to hug little Prowl and Grimlock the whole entire time!

You are such a fantastic writer and I wish there was a sequel to this...not to mention a hint of romance between Prowl and Crystal would have really made my day reading this!

But alas, there was none!
But other than that, this will be on my faves! GREAT JOB!

Hay!

Great job please do more with Crystal and the TF guys.


Love the story!!

oh my head. I read this thing for about five hours all the way through since 3:00 am this morning. That's saying alot because I don't normally do that, especially with a fanfic. (I can only think of two others that made me do that)
And it WAS alot like a G1 episode, and I couldn't stop laughing at the lines around "So, you have a dinosaur to pick up guys for you?" and the torture poor Ratchet was going through.
But, I have to do this, one gripe. Wheeljack is a bit out of character. Though you nailed his fancination for knowledge of what everything is for, he was much too grumpy. Wheeljack is more of the happy guy with his head in the clouds, at least he is in the cartoon. (after his pessimist first apperance.)
Overall, very, very good. Yes. Oh yes indeed!:grins:

Wow. Wonderful story. I love the feel of it! Though, the last line makes me think there's going to be a sequel. I mean Crystal had a life changing event, and you expect us to believe that everything goes back to normal? Everyone involved had to have been affected in some way. Awesome story!

Just finished. This was a very good story. I'm really picky about what I read and this held my attention and interest all the way through, despite barely mentioning my favorite character and having a good chunk of stuff with the character I dislike the most (Blaster, and your version of him didn't irritate me as much as he usually does).

I noticed some typos here and there throughout the story, but it wasn't enough to throw me out of the narrative. Great job.

(is steadily reading through this when she should be sleeping). I really like it so far, which is saying a lot since I have a strong Con bias (is a rabid Soundwave fangirl). o.o Poor Soundwave, Blaster violated him. (goes back to reading)

This was a really good fic! The mini-bots idea was awesome and you used it well!

Great story. It's very original and I love how you made Jazz get all jealous when someone else was getting attention instead of him. Excellent work.

Your fellow author,

Serling.

Awesome fic.

What was the inscription?

I loved reading this!