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Reviews For: Cold Water Wash

Beaglicious
2007-10-23
ch 1,
abuseBy far the best Roomies laundry fic I've ever read!

I loved how Ray called Neela out on stealing his shirt, but loved even more that he didn't ask for it back.

And as for the forgetting to wash in cold water - it was funny and romantic all at the same time! Nice touch having her panties tucked in between the legs of his jeans.

Gotta love Ray for his thoughts taking a turn south, and even more for planning out the next laundry day.

Great job!
siddika
2007-10-20
ch 1,
abuseNice.
starrylaa
2007-10-17
ch 1,
abuseBrilliant story, my fav line has to be "Last time you did laundry, I lost a t-shirt". Classic!
coffee dazed
2007-10-16
ch 1,
abusereally good, nice amount of tension between them can totally see that happening
hinky doodle
2007-10-16
ch 1,
abuseHaha! This is really cute. Poor Neela with her ruined underwear. And poor Ray with his problem ;)

I like that he caught on to the tshirt stealing too.
Updates-Please
2007-10-15
ch 1,
abuseThat was hot and kinky. I loved it. You should write a sequel. Excellent oneshot.
starryjen
2007-10-15
ch 1,
abuseAh, a perfect smattering of smut and laughter, just what a girl needed a long day at the office!
Moonlight Enchantments
2007-10-15
ch 1,
abusehahahaha
this was funny!
very great roomie fluff :D :D
butterflyswest
2007-10-14
ch 1,
abuseOK need I say it ? OK I will more please! I need a fix!!
dshortklutz
2007-10-14
ch 1,
abuseAwesome story. I could just see that happening on the show, good job.
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