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| Beaglicious 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseBy far the best Roomies laundry fic I've ever read! I loved how Ray called Neela out on stealing his shirt, but loved even more that he didn't ask for it back. And as for the forgetting to wash in cold water - it was funny and romantic all at the same time! Nice touch having her panties tucked in between the legs of his jeans. Gotta love Ray for his thoughts taking a turn south, and even more for planning out the next laundry day. Great job! |
| siddika 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseNice. |
| starrylaa 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant story, my fav line has to be "Last time you did laundry, I lost a t-shirt". Classic! |
| coffee dazed 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abusereally good, nice amount of tension between them can totally see that happening |
| hinky doodle 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseHaha! This is really cute. Poor Neela with her ruined underwear. And poor Ray with his problem ;) I like that he caught on to the tshirt stealing too. |
| Updates-Please 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was hot and kinky. I loved it. You should write a sequel. Excellent oneshot. |
| starryjen 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseAh, a perfect smattering of smut and laughter, just what a girl needed a long day at the office! |
| Moonlight Enchantments 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abusehahahaha this was funny! very great roomie fluff :D :D |
| butterflyswest 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseOK need I say it ? OK I will more please! I need a fix!! |
| dshortklutz 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story. I could just see that happening on the show, good job. |