Cute imagery! You need to draw a picture of Nephry running around at the beginning!

You have a realy awesome story here. You used great expression, and with your wonderful descriptions, I felt like I was in the story! Watching Jade teach little Nephry how to torture people... oh, how heart-warming! ^_^

Great story! Keep on writing - you definitely have some amazing talent!

i liked this,is a very cute story

Aw, how cute! :D

Wonderful fic! The descriptions are beautiful, and I love how you characterized Jade as a child perfectly!

I can totally see him using Flame Burst to do tedious chores XD That was awesome~

Ah, the bond between a brother and sister. An amusing piece, keep writing!

Adorable. Absolutely adorable. I love little Keterburger fics, and this was just sweet. There's a bit of caring older brother in Jade, really! I swear! Hehe, and you captured that nicely.