How was that NOT yaoi? It had NaruSasu written all over it! Maybe I just read too much yaoi... That's probably it. Anyways, it was really interesting and well written. Good job.

*sniffs* how sweet! it certainly seems like yaoi though...*yaoi fan*

OMJ i love i will follow you into the dark well anything thats death cab for cutie tey sre awsome!! i also loved the fic it was soo sad but really good!!
Michelle

Well, that was sappier than expected... But it was still good. You had better write a SasuNaru story soon, or continue one of the ones you have already, or I'll go all psyco-crazed on ya and butcher you on All Hallows Eve! ^^ (jk, but really, I hope you write some SN soon!)

The starting was a little weird and too mysterious. You might want to add more details about how Naruto died. It's quite nice for a short story, but I feel you should cut down on repeating the song lyrics. Just in case you're planning to write a longer story, just remember to add more light-hearted scenes where possible; for example, how Naruto and Sasuke grew up together. That would make the ending more tragic.

Anyway, nice work on the whole. I'll be looking forward to your upcoming fanfics.