Wow...uh...did Sheppard die? O_o

Another wonderful story, although this one was kind of...weirder...than "The Gifts And the Wishes". But it was still very well-written. You sure you're not going to write a sequel? I'd love one...your Atlantis stories are just so intriguing and beautiful. Besides, I kind of want to see the Old One and Al again. And I wonder, what is happening to Carson exactly...?

Excellent work. Hope you write more. :)

Wow, interesting take on the whole "vampiric" angle of the Wraith...