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Reviews For: Second Chances: Party Time Blues

MagicSwede1965
2008-04-22
ch 6,
abuseThis was fun, and as always, a fast-paced and exciting read! Having Todd trapped in a trash can was so appropriate for a bad guy...hee hee! And the love between Rick and Laurie just grows and grows, and gets sweeter all the time. (I am working on more goodies, but took some time out to read a bit!) Great work!
bionic4ever
2007-10-14
ch 6,
abuseI love this story! Great work on imagery - the crook in the garbage can made me laugh out loud! This one had me gripping my mouse for dear life, and had the sweetest big red ribbon at the end for a guaranteed smile.
Thank you for a really great story!
:)
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