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onions
2009-08-18 . chapter 4
Do you not have plans of continuing this story anymore? T__T
anit0523
2009-07-19 . chapter 5
Aww. This story hasn't been updated in a long time. :( i hope you work on it some time in the future. But of course that is entirely up to you, so on the the review.

I wasn't sure what to expect but i was pleasantly surprised reading this. I have never really entertained the thought of Phoenix and Frannie together for more than a few seconds before sending it away, but this might make me a fan. xD Mostly because i found it really funny. While i was reading i had a lot to say, but i forgot it all. xD (I remember really enjoying the "Don't do drugs, children" special from everyone's favorite scruffy detective.) But i guess really what i want to say the most is that you deserve some SERIOUS props. Romance, comedy, and akwardness all in one story. Thats hard to pull off. Add in two insanely different characters and force them to work together, and its a whole other ball game. Awesome job. Keep it up. :D
Feenziska1997
2009-06-28 . chapter 5
Your story is so freakin' amazing!Plz update!I love the story!I also love Phoenix/Franziska but then my name made it obvious to everyone...anyway great story!I really would love an update!
fortunata
2009-06-02 . chapter 4
wow. wow. im surprised you haven't updated this story for a year. anyway, really good, again its got me tingling all over just waiting for the "moments". your writing skills are really good, very fluid and such. good plot too, although still not finished.
fortunata
2009-06-02 . chapter 3
great character-interaction, quite hilarious, especially bet. nick and miles. although i suggest a little proof reading next time, but this is constructive comments, hope you dont mind. ^_^
fortunata
2009-06-02 . chapter 2
alright, some progress for nick!

again, great chapter. i especially like your skill in keeping the characters the way they are just like in the game.

really entertaining stuff.
fortunata
2009-06-02 . chapter 1
wow, this first chapters quite exciting! its got me on my heels! very nice, wholesome writing ^_^

cant wait to read more..
The Red Lone Wolf
2009-05-02 . chapter 5
OMG please update, this story rocks my socks. I love Phoenix x Franziska...I'm not sure if i spelled that right but anyway, please keep writing!
yinyang
2009-03-18 . chapter 5
D; why haven't you update such an epic fic?
Jacceh
2009-03-02 . chapter 5
I really hope you update this soon, even though it's been quite a while...I'd really like to see more~
Brandon
2009-01-01 . chapter 5
You have to update this soon. Please?
DreamBigToFallHard
2008-09-07 . chapter 5
OMG

you have to
youi hear me U HAVE TO

UPDATE VERY VERY SOON
Icsifil
2008-07-02 . chapter 5
Although it doesn't seem like you've updated this in a while, I'd love to see moar. Keep up the good work.
TK907
2008-05-13 . chapter 5
Hey great story so far! I hope you keep at this and are able to finish. I’ve read your other story "Imprisoned" and I thought that was one of the best sokka/azula stories out there regardless on how small the "fandom" is. (I didn’t even know you wrote it heheh) Anyway I like how this Franziska had more of a developing feel then most of the other stories I’ve read, more of a heart? I don’t know heh. Well great work and i cant wait to read the rest, Good luck with all your school work.
JSfein-10joinfei
2008-04-17 . chapter 5
I'm enjoying this... I'm more of a MilesXFranziska fan, but this is pretty funny!

10join
fei!
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