 onions 2009-08-18 . chapter 4 Do you not have plans of continuing this story anymore? T__T |
 anit0523 2009-07-19 . chapter 5Aww. This story hasn't been updated in a long time. :( i hope you work on it some time in the future. But of course that is entirely up to you, so on the the review.
I wasn't sure what to expect but i was pleasantly surprised reading this. I have never really entertained the thought of Phoenix and Frannie together for more than a few seconds before sending it away, but this might make me a fan. xD Mostly because i found it really funny. While i was reading i had a lot to say, but i forgot it all. xD (I remember really enjoying the "Don't do drugs, children" special from everyone's favorite scruffy detective.) But i guess really what i want to say the most is that you deserve some SERIOUS props. Romance, comedy, and akwardness all in one story. Thats hard to pull off. Add in two insanely different characters and force them to work together, and its a whole other ball game. Awesome job. Keep it up. :D |
 Feenziska1997 2009-06-28 . chapter 5Your story is so freakin' amazing!Plz update!I love the story!I also love Phoenix/Franziska but then my name made it obvious to everyone...anyway great story!I really would love an update! |
 fortunata 2009-06-02 . chapter 4wow. wow. im surprised you haven't updated this story for a year. anyway, really good, again its got me tingling all over just waiting for the "moments". your writing skills are really good, very fluid and such. good plot too, although still not finished. |
 fortunata 2009-06-02 . chapter 3great character-interaction, quite hilarious, especially bet. nick and miles. although i suggest a little proof reading next time, but this is constructive comments, hope you dont mind. ^_^ |
 fortunata 2009-06-02 . chapter 2alright, some progress for nick!
again, great chapter. i especially like your skill in keeping the characters the way they are just like in the game.
really entertaining stuff. |
 fortunata 2009-06-02 . chapter 1wow, this first chapters quite exciting! its got me on my heels! very nice, wholesome writing ^_^
cant wait to read more.. |
 The Red Lone Wolf 2009-05-02 . chapter 5OMG please update, this story rocks my socks. I love Phoenix x Franziska...I'm not sure if i spelled that right but anyway, please keep writing! |
 yinyang 2009-03-18 . chapter 5 D; why haven't you update such an epic fic? |
 Jacceh 2009-03-02 . chapter 5I really hope you update this soon, even though it's been quite a while...I'd really like to see more~ |
 Brandon 2009-01-01 . chapter 5 You have to update this soon. Please? |
 DreamBigToFallHard 2008-09-07 . chapter 5OMG
you have to
youi hear me U HAVE TO
UPDATE VERY VERY SOON |
 Icsifil 2008-07-02 . chapter 5Although it doesn't seem like you've updated this in a while, I'd love to see moar. Keep up the good work. |
 TK907 2008-05-13 . chapter 5 Hey great story so far! I hope you keep at this and are able to finish. I’ve read your other story "Imprisoned" and I thought that was one of the best sokka/azula stories out there regardless on how small the "fandom" is. (I didn’t even know you wrote it heheh) Anyway I like how this Franziska had more of a developing feel then most of the other stories I’ve read, more of a heart? I don’t know heh. Well great work and i cant wait to read the rest, Good luck with all your school work. |
 JSfein-10joinfei 2008-04-17 . chapter 5I'm enjoying this... I'm more of a MilesXFranziska fan, but this is pretty funny!
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