Nice story. :)

There. Guess i have nothing else to say.

Oh wait. BTW, grammer wasn't really a big deal. Just thought you'd like to know.

So it WAS him-!

LOL, just kidding. I knew it was him all along. :)

Nice job. Now onto the last chapter! :D

I think the chapter's fine by itself. :)

Really, you writers shouldn't put yourself down too much...

Anyway, i'm gonna read the next chapter now. :)

I wanna know what happens at the party... :|

Okay then, to the next chapter-! 8D

Pudding. HAHAHAHAHA. Oh man...

I'll just keep reading now. :)

That's a nice mother he has there. (LOL)

Great Job so far! :)

Getting Better! :)

Now, to the next chapter!

Yikes. The gym teacher scares me. :|

Great job! :D

That's funny. :D

I want to find out what happens next. :)

Boring? What are you talking about?

Keep going! 8D

BTW, good chapter. :)

'Where did she go?'

Ha ha ha! Glenn always makes me laugh.

Great Job so far. :)

Whoo-hoo! Go Serge! XD

Ha ha. Sorry. :]

Hmm...first chapter, but Kid sounds sweet.

This'll be interesting. :)

i like your story. its very good

Interesting story.