Nice story. :)
There. Guess i have nothing else to say.
Oh wait. BTW, grammer wasn't really a big deal. Just thought you'd like to know.

So it WAS him--!
LOL, just kidding. I knew it was him all along. :)
Nice job. Now onto the last chapter! :D

I think the chapter's fine by itself. :)
Really, you writers shouldn't put yourself down too much...
Anyway, i'm gonna read the next chapter now. :)

I wanna know what happens at the party... :|
Okay then, to the next chapter--! >8D

Pudding. HAHAHAHAHA. Oh man...
I'll just keep reading now. :)

That's a nice mother he has there. (LOL)
Great Job so far! :)

Getting Better! :)
Now, to the next chapter!

Yikes. The gym teacher scares me. :|
Great job!! :D

That's funny. :D
I want to find out what happens next. :)

Boring?! What are you talking about?!
Keep going! >8D
BTW, good chapter. :)

'Where did she go?'
Ha ha ha! Glenn always makes me laugh.
Great Job so far. :)

Whoo-hoo! Go Serge! XD
Ha ha. Sorry. :]

Hmm...first chapter, but Kid sounds sweet.
This'll be interesting. :)

i like your story. its very good

Interesting story.