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| Iagus 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseIts very powerful. The only part I didn't like so much was "But at this point, he doesn't give a shit." It just seems to break the fluency. |
| LitLover07 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I loved it. So cool. litlover07 |
| summerlover1 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseAwesome oneshot totally captures what needs to happen! |