Ahahaha, this is great!

Nice read! :D

holy crap. this is the first kaho and keichi story ive ever read... im glad i read this story. it had me laughing my head off.

bwahahhaha i love the ending that was hilarious you need to defiently right more ;)

its a good surprise. I never expected shimizu to be like that... it was fun...

that was SO highly amusing :D the end especially. loved it.

KeiichixKaho should be more popularized :3

LMFAO.
Wow. That was good. That was amazing. Very nice surprise at the end.

wow that was...different. I wasn't expecting SHIMIZU to be the one...pleasing hino :P
and near the middle is funny when he's thinking "I want." like WOAH there boy! Len's kinda OOC but it's good to see he likes hino :D
and...erm...in the beginning with len before the line separates to the next part with tsuchiura, what does that last sentence mean? "Len hit the bathroom so fast he left scorch marks on the floor." is this supposed to be an innuendo? and the end of tsuchiura's part too where he says he can't walk... I'm not naive it's just...im unsure. clarification onegaishimasu!
thanks for introducing me to shimizu x hino. very interesting :P

Great story! You brought out a side of Shimizu he myseriously hid =)
Oh and I laughed hard at Len n Ryou's reactions after Kahoko left them respectively. Hahaha... xD

Bravo! That was great :D Go KeiichixKahoko! I wish they would end up together :'(

what a cool fan fic...haha..it was awesome..!!

wow! i love Keiichi and Hino they look so good together. i do hope that you do make a sequal. or even a "M" ^^, it could be the music that they made! just think abt it!! hoho

Amazing! Beautiful! Marvalous! I've always wanted them two to get together. And the way you made Keiichi, loved it.

What an extremely cute idea! Much better than getting a tattoo that says 'K' in my opinion.

I adored this! I loved how you equated ordinary sounds to their musical counterparts - brilliant work, please please write more of these two!

that was cool!