Just a pointer. You need to put qoutes in when people are speaking otherwise it gets really confusing.

For example: "Hello, Nicole" she said. "Hello, who are you? etc."

You should edit it. But apart from that it looks good so far.

Oh my gosh what a very good chapter you have wrote. Can you do more please and thank you. Keep smiling. :-)

I'm interested! Besides the fact that I like betaing this and reading this, I think my English grade is going up!

Very nice chapter. Very enjoyable. You have to update in the future. Happy New Year. Keep Smiling. :-)

I have enjoyed this chapter that you have written. Can we have more please. Keep smiling. :-)

Wow it looks really weird to the side like that. Is this the end?

LOL! At first I thought this chapter was all about Slytherin Chearleaders(DON'T ASK!). But now I see that it's not. And I like your idea better than mine. Congrats on another chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Sorry, I'm confused now. So Severus knows who Hermione really is?? umm, k? Please update soon. I think my brain turned to mush when Severus started laughing! LOL

i think your story is good write more please

The dialog set up is a bit difficult to read. I would suggest getting a beta to read it before you post.

Yes I have very much enjoyed this chapter. Please write more, but only if you have the time to do so. Have a good day tomorrow, and keep smiling. :-D

This chapter is cool. I like it, so is there more to come? :-)

LOL! ROTFL! That was HiLaRiOuS! You sure drove me into a fit of giggles. 12 year olds are smart huh(the 2nd years who decided to record it all) and (YOU)

Great chapter. Please update soon! For me!?!?!

lol, cool costumes. So what are the Latin Meanings anyways?? Can't wait for the ball btw. Thanks again, please update soon!

What translator do you use. I use one called FreeLang Dictionary.
There are several languages that all available to use with this program.
Very good chapter today. I have enjoyed it. :-)
May we have more please.