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pie
2009-11-29 . chapter 20
As I'm sure other reviewers may have reminded you by now, Lavender Brown has been dead for several chapters. It would be best for you to correct your error now - in this chapter - rather than simply leaving a blurb in a following chapter, which is rather unprofessional, even for a b-movie style story like this one is turning out to be. It won't force you to do anything more difficult than swapping out the old information.
Rowan Mikaio
2009-11-16 . chapter 22
I still don't understand why Heinzl isn't just murdering everyone who's shown themselves to be obviously against this. I don't think it would be right, but it would be a lot simpler with a lot fewer problems (and fewer muggleborn casualties) if he just killed all of the people like Lucius Malfoy. He's done it before, with the Malfoys, Longbottoms etc. Why didn't he just continue that until the problem solved itself?

Sorry, but that's just really bothering me.
annajesse65230@yahoo.com
2009-11-16 . chapter 23
Thanks for another great chapter. Sorry that I'm slightly late in getting my review out. Sounds like the battle has started. Wonder what will happen next. Looking foreward to the next posting.
dbzgtfan2004
2009-11-13 . chapter 1
This is a good story. Please continue. Harry and Hermione forever.
god1432
2009-11-13 . chapter 23
plz update,love this.
sheltie
2009-11-13 . chapter 23
interesting chap can't wait for the next one
Fibinaci
2009-11-12 . chapter 23
So with the purebloods acting so atrociously it was easy to dehumanize them and then get more radicallized muggleborns to spout almost the same thing as the worst purebloods did just in reverse, and then inevitably they'll destroy each other.

While I can see Harry and Hermione surviving this I dont see how the wizarding world in Britain can ever be rebuilt, both sides seem intent on burning everything to the ground, and there will be just too many hard feelings on both sides.
beauty0102
2009-11-11 . chapter 23
yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.
redrose88
2009-11-11 . chapter 23
great update i loved it
Wolfric
2009-11-11 . chapter 23
Good chapter. I wonder who is playing Draco under polyjuice? Thanks for writing. W.
mworth1019
2009-11-11 . chapter 23
I have read this one and its predecessor in one go today. They are both good, please update quickly. I do hope it ends well for the good guys...
rainbowflowers
2009-11-11 . chapter 23
I really like this story although Heinzl is a bit scary.
Readerforlife
2009-11-11 . chapter 23
stupid malfoy
Horacrux777
2009-11-11 . chapter 23
nice. i wasnt expecting the attack on the ministry
Tentrees
2009-11-11 . chapter 23
Classic final speech. But it just goes toshow that Gamden is as loony as Voldemort was. Malfoy not much better. The Extremists od bth sides are the monsters we make in our hearts and minds. The world is not black and white but grey.

Neither side has a proper vision of the future. Neither side is willing to compromise. The only thing going to be left after this war is the survivors.
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