 pie 2009-11-29 . chapter 20 As I'm sure other reviewers may have reminded you by now, Lavender Brown has been dead for several chapters. It would be best for you to correct your error now - in this chapter - rather than simply leaving a blurb in a following chapter, which is rather unprofessional, even for a b-movie style story like this one is turning out to be. It won't force you to do anything more difficult than swapping out the old information. |
 Rowan Mikaio 2009-11-16 . chapter 22I still don't understand why Heinzl isn't just murdering everyone who's shown themselves to be obviously against this. I don't think it would be right, but it would be a lot simpler with a lot fewer problems (and fewer muggleborn casualties) if he just killed all of the people like Lucius Malfoy. He's done it before, with the Malfoys, Longbottoms etc. Why didn't he just continue that until the problem solved itself?
Sorry, but that's just really bothering me. |
 annajesse65230@yahoo.com 2009-11-16 . chapter 23 Thanks for another great chapter. Sorry that I'm slightly late in getting my review out. Sounds like the battle has started. Wonder what will happen next. Looking foreward to the next posting. |
 dbzgtfan2004 2009-11-13 . chapter 1This is a good story. Please continue. Harry and Hermione forever. |
 god1432 2009-11-13 . chapter 23 plz update,love this. |
 sheltie 2009-11-13 . chapter 23interesting chap can't wait for the next one |
 Fibinaci 2009-11-12 . chapter 23So with the purebloods acting so atrociously it was easy to dehumanize them and then get more radicallized muggleborns to spout almost the same thing as the worst purebloods did just in reverse, and then inevitably they'll destroy each other.
While I can see Harry and Hermione surviving this I dont see how the wizarding world in Britain can ever be rebuilt, both sides seem intent on burning everything to the ground, and there will be just too many hard feelings on both sides. |
 beauty0102 2009-11-11 . chapter 23yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so. |
 redrose88 2009-11-11 . chapter 23great update i loved it |
 Wolfric 2009-11-11 . chapter 23Good chapter. I wonder who is playing Draco under polyjuice? Thanks for writing. W. |
 mworth1019 2009-11-11 . chapter 23I have read this one and its predecessor in one go today. They are both good, please update quickly. I do hope it ends well for the good guys... |
 rainbowflowers 2009-11-11 . chapter 23I really like this story although Heinzl is a bit scary. |
 Readerforlife 2009-11-11 . chapter 23stupid malfoy |
 Horacrux777 2009-11-11 . chapter 23nice. i wasnt expecting the attack on the ministry |
 Tentrees 2009-11-11 . chapter 23Classic final speech. But it just goes toshow that Gamden is as loony as Voldemort was. Malfoy not much better. The Extremists od bth sides are the monsters we make in our hearts and minds. The world is not black and white but grey.
Neither side has a proper vision of the future. Neither side is willing to compromise. The only thing going to be left after this war is the survivors. |