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ayame879
2009-11-10 . chapter 1
roflmao lol Hiashi and tenten ur meen for giving neji a boner in public but hey a girl has to have some fun XD
kakifuarika
2009-10-08 . chapter 1
=) Poor Neji... Who knew Math could help you in writing a lemon XD FOIL method in algebra
moedeity
2009-09-18 . chapter 1
LOL! i love this! good job!
Unices
2009-08-12 . chapter 1
lol well that makes things interesting now dosen't it XD
Pleasantries and the Aftermath
2009-06-19 . chapter 1
That was sinfully wonderful. If only there were more of their sexploits... -hint hint-
...
2009-05-24 . chapter 1
fantastic
Aly
2009-04-27 . chapter 1
Lolz. BAD TENTEN! Making Neji krazy in front of everyone! BAD, NAUGHTY TENTEN! HAVE SOME SHAME, WOMAN!
TenTen: ...Shame isn't a part of me.
Neji: No one knows that more than me... *glare*
TenTen: Whatever. You KNOW you love me, Neji-KUN...
Neji: ...
TenTen: YOU DIDN'T DENY IT!
Neji: I WAS ABOUT TO!
Aly: *scoff* Ya right.
Nerd4eva
2009-04-04 . chapter 1
Lol!! Aw that was cute, lol I could so picture Tenten torturing him at the cafe. Hee Hee awesome job! =P
CrystalDragon791
2009-02-10 . chapter 1
Hiashi? Cracking a joke? Do you know how much that made ME crack up? DUDE. Funniest lemon I ever read. Tenten is an evil genius, and Ataru should DEFINITELY invest in earplugs.
Tobi-obsessed
2008-11-09 . chapter 1
I'm not legal, but I don't care, I have a sick, twisted mind so I'm not scarred. I actually found this on Google Pics, and I was utterly shocked to find it here on FF. I'm glad I did. C: Every time I read this I laugh like a maniac, especially with TenTen's "Isn't. Can't rape the willing, after all." and Hiashi. I love this fic to tiny bits. :D
mai-sterrrr
2008-09-10 . chapter 1
LMFAO (:
that was hilarious !!
'Cant rape the willing, after all.'
&& Hiashi ? Major laughter dosage.
Yugao
2008-09-09 . chapter 1
OMFG I'M NAT LEGAL BUT I'M HERE ANYWAY SO SUE ME :D

Yeah. It's yours, so I couldn't help it, really. Hahaha. Everything was awesomely awesome, and I think you made me like Hiashi there (because I was completely opinion-less of him before).

Favorite lines:

"That's beside the point!"

"Isn't. Can't rape the willing, after all."

xDD I LOL'd though I'm not sure why.
Rissa Hitsugaya
2008-07-28 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA! YOU ARE VERY FUNNY! Keep it up.
kaleni chan
2008-07-28 . chapter 1
HA! rotflmao!
Jiraiya's mistress
2008-07-15 . chapter 1
hahaha that was ** awsome defo favorite well done
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