| Reviews for Lemon FOIL |
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Cavallo Alato 1/9/13 . chapter 1This...this was precious. You write them so well, and I loved the part at the end with Hiashi. Oh, Neji. (And Shikamaru, ah! I just love all of this so much...) |
scarlet letters in the snow 1/8/13 . chapter 1Ahhhhh so awesome! :) especially the last line. |
yaoiboy153 11/2/12 . chapter 1AWESOME! I needed this thank you for a wonderful fanfic! |
krista shae 9/28/12 . chapter 1 i really liked it :) it was awesome |
xxxFlamingWingsxxx 9/23/12 . chapter 1Hahahaha... Hiashi :))) |
kristen 8/1/12 . chapter 1 Make more plz! |
PoppyPersephone 7/21/12 . chapter 1 hee hee. _ |
PoppyPersephone 7/17/12 . chapter 1 Awesome ending! _ |
Animefangirl95 7/6/12 . chapter 1Hahaha Awe man Shika and Hiashi had the best parts haha |
Balenciaga 5/1/12 . chapter 1This is awesome :)) Especially the Outer (limits) part - I didn't expect that! hahaha |
jinjurikiLover 3/22/12 . chapter 1omg love the story! hope the other chapter comes soon! with tenten "torturing" Neji XD |
Dokuritsu17 11/20/11 . chapter 1I can't help but to go back to tho story every once in a while. "The first time they had sex it was at a shockingly inappropriate time and at a shockingly inappropriate place.." That just makes me laugh, shocking for The Neji Hyuuga to eye empty rooms during a mission, haha. Oooooh, Shikamaru is soooo right, how troublesome at least for Neji. I suggest for that neighbor to go on a vacation, because we all know that won't stop for a while. I just love Hiashi's last comment, don't over do it Neji! Hope you continue more stories like this. Ja ne! |
nina lee 7/2/11 . chapter 1 i...uh-i really didn't get it DX |
AkaneTheSlayer 6/20/11 . chapter 1Cheeky Hiashi, you little perv XP This story was very cute, and yes: the neighbor should probably go out and buy some for future reference |
kitty-chan 6/5/11 . chapter 1 that was seriously the best thing I've read in a long, long time. was making me laugh out loud, over and over, and really well written. really, really sexy. loved the 'outer' one especially, and the inner one was... unexpected. x3 The whole thing was very creative, a step up from mindless smut, lol. you ended on the perfect note, too. xD Awesome job, all told. :D |