Wow! this is really great! I hope you update soon! As for the whole age difference thing, it doesn't really matter since all Saiyans live really long right? I'm definitely adding this to my favorites.

Hey pan is not really the girl to have crush and why is she 18. the pan we know and love the (KID) who's not afraid to get her hands dirty. other than that it OK.

Keep writting

B.B.

P.S. to short

This is good. Update soon please!

oh... poor panny! and she got all prettiful for him! can't wait for the next chap! ;)

Well it's a lil longer than the rest, and of course ya know that I love it. I can't wait to see Trunks reasons for bringing a skank...um I mean date with him. Great job. Laters

THis is a neat story.

THIS IS GODD ! GOSH! SHE LIKES TRUNKS! .. y do everyone like him ??

So far so good, and this is actually pretty good. But it's too short. Still I liked it. So keep these chapters coming, and don't think to badly of this pairing with their age diffrence and all. I mean every girl that I know has had some kind of crush on an older man before..so the age thing shouldn't really be too much of an issue. Well they should both be consenting adults. It would be a lil ugh if the chick was still a minor and all. Then yea I can see where that might be a lil weird. Just as long as their both adults. Ok I'm babaling now. So update soon. Laters

...this was GREAT!
Must read more!
Keep going!
^_^

please continue, it's sounding good!

:) this is cute! i love the fact that trunks is wearing a business suit. i bet pan luvs him all dressed up, all she has to do is get a wedding dress and drag him away to get married! ^_^