Reviews for Alternate Steps

Reviews For: Alternate Steps

Cherry 2008-08-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat was fantastic. You do NOT in any way suck at poetry, i thought it was well done and fiited with the piece.
Ahotep 2007-11-15 ch 1,	abuseHello! I said I may read some of your HSM fic and well I did. I don't know who the characters are but the fic was realy beatutiful. You could feel hope, fear... Well I liked it. Now I think I must go and find some infos on HSH so that I'll understand it better...
Ms.RydenPotter 2007-10-27 ch 1,	abuseUr poetry is kool! Dont put urself down!I loved it and keep it up!=)
mugglerock 2007-10-27 ch 1,	abuseThat was really interesting. I liked the difference perspectives of their place and just how much they needed to be where they were. I really liked it. My favorite line was, "His life was too loud now and he couldn’t escape the noise." Beautiful.
poppyfields13 2007-10-24 ch 1,	abuseInteresting Rypay and Choy implications. I really liked the bit about how Ryan always saves Sharpay if she screws up – so true. And I liked Chad’s jealousy of Gabriella. It’s so much more realistic than him just suddenly liking her, like what happened in the movies. And Troy asking him to walk behind? JERK, although, strangely still in character. And it would so be him to just not notice how much something like that would hurt Chad. Last stanza was really sad, but I thought it was pretty well written. I really like this but I think it would be more complete with a second chapter. Ryan and Chad don’t necessarily have to get together (although I would love that! XD) but maybe just find friendship with one another (like in “I Don’t Dance). They need a happy ending!
Desinere 2007-10-24 ch 1,	abuseCool oneshot, and thanks so much for your review!! Write more Chyan man, you could definitely pull it off. :) -Desinere.
Idio-cynic 2007-10-17 ch 1,	abuseI adore this piece so very, very much. I like how you depicted Ryan and Chad as being so dependent on these people who steal their limelight. The overtones of bro&sis friendship are absolutely lovely. How Ryan’s always the one who comforts Sharpay even though she never treats him as an equal, and how he doesn’t really care because all he needs is her. It’s rather sad too, I suppose, because they’ve been in this position so long that they can’t get out of it. Favorited, of course.
Anberlin Cutie 12 2007-10-15 ch 1,	abuseI actually liked this. I'm not really a bif fan of Chyan but that is probably because I am a Troy fan forever (Troy Angst=Love). The poem wasn't that bad but I have to give yopu props for stepping out of the box on that one. I also never seen Chad seem like that. Good Job. I hope you write more stories. Maybe a Troy with someone like Zeke or Jason. Not many of those around. But good job on the story.

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