I must say, I really really enjoyed this chapter. I liked being able to finally see Ceres, and Aya's thoughts on the entire matter of sealing her away. But I have a feeling this may not be the last we see of her. Mabybe? Maybe not?

Haha, clueless Aki. It had been so unbelieveably obvious what was in the bag. But it was kinda sweet how she'd bought a camera. And with the ending, does that mean he's finally come to terms with his feelings for Aya?

Also, I'd really like to see Aya be more torn about her leaving Toya. Because she did love him, and I think it'd be really hard on her if this had actually happened in the manga/anime. I don't think by her leaving, her feelings would suddenly just disapear for him.

But anywho, can't wait for the next chapter. I'm gonna keep my eyes open for it.

I yelped in surprise and happiness when I saw that you updated, and I wasn't disappointed, it was a nice, long chapter and I loved their "foreplay" if I can say that, especially when we suddenly saw Aki's feelings got things really exciting;) There was a part which was purely genius, I can't tell how much it inspired me "And in wondering, she would perhaps think about it. And in thinking, would then grow curious. Curiosity could be the door that opened her mind to him." Thank you for the update.

I would like to say something else. I read your author's note and.. well I was a bit shocked to tell the truth (I don't know if you've written such thing before, at least I never saw it). By principle I never review to the stories of those authors who try to blackmail the readers by saying that "If you don't gimme 6 reviews I won't update", but you know I love your stories so much and I respect and admire your workmanship, your writings are truly a piece of art that's why I ask you please don't say such unfair thing to your faithful readers.

As a fellow author I really-really understand how disheartening it is when one doesn't get enough appreciation from the readers for whom the author worked for. I believe if there was justice in this world your stories whould have hundreds of reviews because they're among the highest quality fics on ffnet but it can't be helped, not many people read Ayashi no Ceres fics and even less amount read incest fics. I wish that we, a small group of readers, would be able to convey our love for your story strong enough to motivate you to update and keep your interest in the fandom, but it must come from the heart not something that is forced.

Ah. The curse of unfinished stories. I must wait for more updates. And I do hope you keep updating! I love this story, it's written amazingly well. And you're able to display so much emotion with such little amounts of dialouge.

I think this has to be my favorite chapter so far. And you may have officially made Aki my favorite character in Ayashi no ceres. (sorry Yuuhi) I just love his internal conflicts with his feelings. So very cute.

I've never been a fan of incest stories, but I have always thought Aki and Aya were just so cute together. I'm glad to find a good story with the two of them.

And although Touya is nice, I never understood WHY she fell in love with him. It happened so quickly, that I was taken-back and just like, "Wait, what just happened?" Aki and Aya have a past together and a understanding of eachother. And they even have relations deeper than that with the whole Cere's and husband thing. So I can't wait to keep reading.

That was a sweet chapter, I loved Aya's conclusion: "we will carry home with us...wherever it is we go from here." It was a beautiful way to express the bond of the twins, the more I think about it, the more I find it very philosophical.
This chapter gave us an insight to the Aya's heart, and I totally agree with your AN, that Aya's relationship with Touya forced many elements of the twins emotions or the drama to be ignored. It's a pity because I think Touya was not worth it:)

Wow, another update! I must be getting really lucky! Anyway,l loved your update- sort of short but pleasant, nonetheless. Keep it coming... can't get enough of this fic. ^_^

I am so glad to hear that you've finished writing this story! I've been waiting for this story for a long time now, and I loved your update! Can't wait for the next one. ^_^

Oh my, today is my lucky day! :) I am so happy that you are still working on these piece of diamonds! And you finished writing..!:) I can't tell how grateful I am that such an amazing writer like you still write fics for such a small fandom.
This chapter was deep and dynamic, I loved the mirror theme, how Aki cried too, showing the deep bond between them: they are really together in happiness as well as in pain. A wonderful, touching chapter. Thank you for updating!:)

i love it !
promise me you'll update soon ? 8D PLEASE ?

Another beautiful chapter. Can't wait for your next update.

This...this is just gorgeous. I look forward to more.

I also like how Aki is portrayed. You give a beautiful edge to his lust for Aya, something gentle and timid but still fierce and driving. The poetry of this story is a really strong point- there's logic fiction, poetic fiction and a cross between the two, and I would say you have a lot of poetry in your words.

I love the tenderness between them! My stories are too raw for that ^.^, so it's nice to read it somewhere else.

aw... that's beautiful. I like this story. You have a gift at creating suspense and holding the reader in it by tempting them with false reality.

I really like the taste idea and how you describe it too ^.^. Very poetic and well thought-out.