She's going to shine like a star.

Interesting poem. It can actually be made into a song, if you find the right music for it. Hehe. :)

Not as bad as some poems I've read. But that's really not saying much. According to one poem, Sasuke's hair is full of pain (I kid you not).

It sounds like a pop song. The beginning when you used variations on the line "knows her name" I kept thinking about the Cheers theme song.

-S

Yes, you're right. It was pretty lame. Epitome of lame. Paragon of lame.

And that makes you lame by association.

I love it! Absolutely lovely! And I love how it's both their POV's so to speak! Great job! =D