Awww! I love it! :D you should totally do a continuation of this story! 3

this was good, an interesting approach to a story, never thought of doing just speech but it works surprisingly well. great work. :D :D :D

Aww... that was sweet.

That was so cute, I loved it!

xPippy

Interesting format here. It was easy to follow, I liked it. Like how you threw the Tiva in there. I could see Tim struggling and Tony yelling at him like that. Nice work. Classic Tim/Tony friendship :)

-TLH

This was wonderful, do you have a follow up?

Great, and I might say 'chilling' if you didn't think I was trying for a pun. Great glimpse at men facing what might be the last moments of life, finally coming clean with each other. How good in the end that Tim was finally Probie.

I'm glad you didn't fall for the cliche of hugging to keep warm, that would not have been them.

TOO, TOO CUTE! and so in-character! i loved this, please write another. XDD

Very cute. You really got the Tony/Tim dynamic there. Well done.

wow- i will always love those two together- they are so much like big bro/little bro to me- even on the show- the friendship shines though (sigh)

Beautifully done! Thank you for this. :)

aw this works well my dear friend never said it couldnt be in a blizzard great job

I loved it. I missed this on NFA, must go back and check.