hm...well the ending was a bit too abrupt and I don't think Rika and Yomi should get together but this was overall a good story.

It's really cool so far, they also say that a kitsune gets one tail for every 1,0 years its lived.

Rereading. I liked the way you started the story.
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Amazing story. The plot definitely caught my attention. I can't wait to go and read the sequel. :D

Awesome! Sequel here I come!
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Wow.
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Go Yoko! Awesome job!
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Is she Maya? No idea why I thought that but hey it will work. Awesome job!
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YOU KILLED HIM OFF!?
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Interesting pictures. I had trouble getting to them but they were nice. Awesome job!
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Well, she has no need for Yomi now does she? Awesome job!
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If I was in her shoes, I wouldn't be sure if I would trust the information he gives me. Awesome job!
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Ouch. Poor Kuronue. Awesome job!
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May I ask what the site was? Awesome job!
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Wow... she's got a split personality almost. Awesome job!
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