 QueenOfHearts3 2009-07-07 . chapter 1aw... hehe. that was adorable! i love it :D very like Ishida and Orihime, right down to his nervous habits and her obsession with odd food combinations lol youve even nailed the... shall we say undercurrent thats so freakin obvious around these two, without goin overboard either into the "just friends" zone or the "dating" zone. thats a very delicate line to walk, that is. youve basically pulled a Kubo-sensei, only better IMO cuz you focus on my two fave characters! WHEE! so faved |
 Pyromaniac-Girl 2008-03-02 . chapter 1That was a really cute fic!
Ishida and Orihime would be a cute couple!!
Have a good day!! |
 jackie 2007-11-06 . chapter 1 wow olivia, that was crazy! The awkward kinda conversation totally seems ishihime LOL and true discriptions and vividness... Wow I really hate you LOL but I really liked it x3 |
 ZTX 2007-10-17 . chapter 1Aww, that was so adorable! I lol'ed at the "And that's why I can't mix leeks with chocolate!" line. So well done!! :D |
 snowleaf 2007-10-17 . chapter 1Totally purty!
The concept is wonderfully pretty. |
 Alaena Night 2007-10-16 . chapter 1You are amazing! Amazing, I say! And you're the sweetest for dedicating this to me. *dies from indescribable happiness* Absolutely AWESOME! I love your writing style.
The story is like not being able to hear words spoken, but... it's like being immersed in the lulling sound of a voice rather than the words themselves, and you did the IshiHime pairing amazing justice with this spectacular piece of writing! You wrote Orihime perfectly, and you portrayed Ishida's seeming inability to think beyond reality and into imagination in such a good way. The last lines were so cute! Orihime can definitely soften him up. Keep up the amazing writing! *hugs*
Also... O_O This story is the first I've ever seen written in the second person viewpoint. It's beyond spectacular that you pulled it off so well! For the duration of this story, I -was- Ishida, feeling his thoughts about Orihime. It was great! You are an absolutely wonderful writer! *hugs*
-Alaena |