I'm not a Maiko fan, but I think this does do the pairing justice. They are both pawns in Azula's game. They just play the game differently.

I liked that. Cute little oneshot. Nice job keep them in character.

I really liked this, it was well written and in character. Good job!

this was pretty good. nice and short and sweet.

Sweet little emo love, how could Zutara still captivate you after you wrote this? It's amazing, much better than the Maiko I wrote! Excellent job.

My gosh... It's so sweet! MAIKO FOREVER! It's hard to write about emo love, but you wrote so well! Good job!

For someone who loves Zutara, you write a pretty darn good Maiko... Seriously this was believeable...

Wow!!


Love it love it love it!!


Please write more Maiko fics..(even if you're a Zutara fan)...

Nice.

^^ very nice!
it would b interesting if you continue

this is great. and so them.

aw! This is great (and not full of cheap emo love that other people say is Maiko ) !!

aw, cute!! I love it! Very in character and very sweet^^

cute. very nice and sweet.

Nice. I'd prefer to see Maiko like this and not like in the Headband. Eugh.