I can see it now; a faerie dragon that can roll up like a pillbug is her mech. Feel sorry for the other guy already, folks. Taranee may be a worry-wart, afraid-of-everything bookworm, but if you push her, she MORE than lives up to her Element. Let's go, Solar Wind! Catch ya on the flipside, A J.

Taranee's kidnappers seem a bit agressive. I wonder if the enemy she is supposed to fight is any better? Well I'd hate to meet them anyway.

I guess we'll see if Taranee is an able puppeteer or not wont we?
Nice job old boy.

P.S. How was your trip?

~Kdh.

New villian and now a new worlds. I hope Taranee gets her questions answered soon without making her freak out again.

Cool chapter. Ha, Lucifer, that's awesome. Could you do Caleb's swords on DA? Kdh.

This is shaping up to be quite the mystery. I like the Will-a-like, he seems to be more interested in keeping people sane than scaring them senseless repeatedly, like Nokata. Great addition, and great story, so far. catch ya on the flipside, so don't get caught in the downslide, A J.

Nice tidbit at the end. I hope to soon learn who these two are that are overseeing everything.

like i promise i started reading one of your stories..this is really interesting...cant wait to read more!...please update SOON!
Rachel.j

Interesting, very interesting. I'm likin' it, really likin' it. I really enjoy Raps. No need to rush the carnage of Tsunami either, genious takes time. Kdh.

I just read your story now and at first I was really confused, until I realized that you are using elements from Andromeda. Actually that confuses me even more, but I would like to see where this goes, so count me in, I will follow this story^^

So Taranee has gone Rip Van Winkle now. That has to be a heavy burden. I wonder if the Oracle is powerful enough to know that she isn't dead? Looking forward to seeing how this Captain treats his crew/captives and their responses to everything.

That wouldn't be my favorite way to start the day either. Extremely cool so far. Glad that you enjoyed the joke and I think his giant form would make a great idea. Thanks. Kdh.

You just HAD to update your story the same day I did mine. Now YOU'RE number 1. Poo. :( LoL

No seriously. This chapter was more entertaining/intriguing to me. The part of her having aged and awaken to realize this, blah blah, reminds me of my Tears of Redemption story when Will had done the same (wake up and realize she's suddenly 21, etc). ^_^

Ah, the memories. LoL

But yeah. Also glad it's a T story. Not a lot of those (or good ones) floating around here. Always, ALWAYS about Will, or Her Majesty the Queen Cornelia. ~_~ Bleh. LoL

Go, 'Ranee! It's your birthday! ^_^

An interesting idea and a different type of start for you. You have me interested. I will be sure to read the next chapter.

P.S.
This week sucks! Just thought you should know.

I hope you plan to add more chapters and not leave everynoe hanging.