I really love how you integrated Aeris into this one. The way you compared/contrasted the two, without really saying that he lost anything between them. Like, he's not replacing her by any means. Wonderfully done.

Very nice, sweet drabble here, and a very interesting take on it. I approve.

Cloudy! It's alright, baby, Aerith's with Zack now. You're free to be happy with Leon now. No one will criticze you.. Aw. Sweet Cloud, still thinking of Aerith. Lovelovelove.

Wow! Wonderful! I loved how it could either be from Leon or Cloud's perspective, talking about Aeirth or Rinoa! So much in such a short piece!

My favorite part of this fic? Easily the fact that it can be either of them. Cloud feeling guilty about not having Aeris or Leon feeling guilty about Rinoa. Which I'm sure was probably your intent. Brilliant. (n.n)

Loved this - You've done a nice job conveying Cloud's conflict/guilt within himself over his memory and feelings for Aeris and his need of and feelings for Leon.

FYI - no big deal - 6th 'paragraph' typo (himself himself).

ZOMG, I LOVE YOU!

That was sweet and wonderful and brilliant and I love it!

You have such a gift with the beautiful art of simplicity, using it to convey the deepest emotions... It'd take me, like, 5 pages to achieve half of what you did in less than one! My fav part: "He missed her presence; he craved his." If THAT just doesn't sum it up... I don't know what else could. Loved it.