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| akayalovesyaoi 2008-10-10 ch 1,  | abuseSo cute and so like them, spazming, being freaked out on one part and smug and worried on the other. I really loved it, but... but Mokona belching at the end cracked me up, that's so like something Clamp would make her/him/it do XD |
| Swirly 2008-09-13 ch 1, anon. | abuse*is greatly amused* Your Watanuki is spot on! Though I don't remember Doumeki having a fanclub... I should go back and watch Holic again some time. Nicely done! |
| MysticAnime 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseTch, you don't give yourself enough credit. You did not fail hard. I enjoyed this, as everything else I've been reading. ^_^ But I'll admit this, you do tend to write better from Doumeki's perspective than Watanuki's. ^_~ Please don't give up on xHolic yet please! Cheers! |
| firedragongirl 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseXDXDXDXDXD This was really fun to read. XDXDXD I hope you create more stories like this one. XDXDXDXD |
| kiiroi yumetobu 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abusehahaha that was really funny |
| Steveness 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseI love this pairing. But more importantly, I love you for writing this pairing so well. Keep up the amazing 104! |
| Lizzycello 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseGosh be darnit! I thought those were REAL moments! T-T They were so xHolic-ish... so well writen! They should out this in the manga! D: I loved it! ^-^ |
| Rings Of Saturn 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was really cute XD Trust Watanuki to be so stubborn XP |
| gwendal's wife 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseWhat to say... CUTE! You haven't lost the touch in making holic fics as much as you want to think... I LOVE IT! Though I don't really get whatr happened with number five... This is definitely going in my faves. If I can add it a hundred times, I would. Seriously. This is one of the best I've ever read. You're a great writer, and you should continue. -gw- |
| tatsumaki 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseThat's AWESOME. Really, that's all. I have no constructive feedback. (Except, uh, in part two, your formatting is off in a couple of places, because this site sure loves the italics and typographical symbols.) |
| serenphoria 2007-10-25 ch 1, | abuseI think Mokona's response in the end clinched it. Imaginative and utterly believable in CLAMP's world. Thanks! |
| Ahria 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute, and had an interesting premise. |
| angelofplottwists 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseI think the "man-friend" line made my day complete. This was outstandingly amusing and by that I mean I laughed hysterically. :D One thing, though: "Because while Yuuko might want to know, but he’s pretty certain that he doesn’t." You really only need the "while" OR the "but", not both. But other than that, nothing wrong and so many things right. |
| Azalee 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseVery nice ^^ Especially the last one, feels so very holic-ish it could (SHould!) be canon, but the one with the fangirls is very funny :D |
| HauntedPast 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseOo! I loved that one. You had Doumeki pegged head on. Wonderful job with Watanuki's character as well-- I felt like I could be reading a manga volume, it was so well written. I loved the whole part about Watanuki making himself sick and not even realizing it. Though I would have loved for Doumeki to show more concern in a different way, I still love what you did. |