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| Atemu'sLotus 2008-06-08 ch 11, | abuseHaha. Carth got stuck with the bill. Poor Catra. Well... She'll remember soon enough. Please keep writing!! |
| FaeTian 2008-05-26 ch 11, | abuseAwesome chapter! I really enjoyed it ^_^ I like how Catra took care of those drunks XD I look forward to reading more! -Fae |
| BananaLollipop7 2008-05-13 ch 11, | abuseAnother fab chapter, lovin' it! |
| Vampire-Orchid 2008-05-12 ch 11, | abuseWell, I just spent the past two hours reading all of your chapters. I must say that I'm very excited to read the next one when it comes out! I certainly hope it's soon! Great work! Faves!! |
| general-joseph-dickson 2008-05-09 ch 11, | abuseHAHA! Make Carth Pay. |
| FaeTian 2008-05-06 ch 10, | abuseI love how you portray Yun XD It just makes me even more fond of him XD Great chapter! I look forward to the next! ~Fae |
| BananaLollipop7 2008-05-05 ch 10, | abuseHeh, I love this story! Catra is one of fave "Revan's", keep it up! |
| Revan Dante 2008-05-05 ch 10, | abuseAw, thank you. |
| general-joseph-dickson 2008-05-05 ch 10, | abuseNice chapter. |
| FaeTian 2008-02-22 ch 9, | abuseThe Gorton Colu part had me laughing as hard as Catra XD Poor Carth. It's ironic how Carth told her not to be sorry about the destruction of Telos because she wasn't responsible. After all, she was once Darth Revan. I just found that interesting^^ Good job on this chapter. I look forward to the next. |
| Atemu'sLotus 2008-02-18 ch 9, | abuseCarth got caught!! That scene reminded me of my older brother who freezes like a deer in head lights whenever a person talks to him. Totally awesome! Please keep writing! |
| general-joseph-dickson 2008-02-17 ch 9, | abuseAtt least she hasnt had to get plugged by Yun yet to get info. |
| Atemu'sLotus 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseYeah! Another fic!! There are so few Revan fics that it makes me sad. And it's a romance! BONUS! It sounds good so far. I like the protective doctor, very nice. Please keep writing!! |
| Snowfur(2lazy2login) 2008-01-24 ch 8, anon. | abuseI like how in here Revan and Carth talk a lot more. An the extra visions are a nice touch, too. |
| FaeTian 2008-01-24 ch 8, | abuseI plan on writing some oneshots of Raven. When I post them I'll be sure to let you know ;) Ooh, interesting dream/vision thing Catra had about the young girl and her parents. Yay! Yun's back! XD |