 Ad Interim. 2009-11-07 . chapter 29I finished. I almost don't want to.
It's been quite a read, and I loved every moment of it. Every plot twist, turn, and abyss made me even more attached to this story. It was great. I'm so happy that I got to read something that was so well-developed and intricate.
Keep writing; you were meant for it. |
 Ad Interim. 2009-11-02 . chapter 9Oh. My. God.
This was so sad, poignant to the point of tears. Great, great, great; Toushirou is just...amazing. And your writing does the whole series justice. Yee, you're phenomenal.
Why couldn't I have read this a year ago? |
 Ayamichan34 2009-09-21 . chapter 29OMG That was one of the best squeals I have ever read! EXCELLENT JOB! |
 Janet 2009-07-28 . chapter 29 Hey nice work! I really LOVE to read your stoys even though I have not read all of The Fire and Ice Chapters. But I well try my best to read all of them sence I have to share this computer. Please keep up the great work beacuse your are really GOOD at writting storys. |
 kazeyukiryusama 2009-06-16 . chapter 29great ending!! such a massive engagement celebration, lol...
Well, you can always count on Yumichika to exaggerate on everything, lol
This is a very nice ending. Thx a lot for sharing this wonderful story with us... ^__^ |
 sayume214 2009-05-24 . chapter 1OMG! i knew something was odd when unohana mentioned his height!
nice mel!
to think i hadn't seen this sequel! |
 staidwaters 2009-05-17 . chapter 29Wow. very nice, very solid plot there. It actually read like a novel, not an epilogue or missing scene or character insight piece like the vast majority of fics. I really, reallt, REALLY enjoyed the plot twists you threw in...the alternate universe switch was the first thing that made me pause and think "dang, but she's a hell of a writer," and the discovery of Matsumoto's daughter just cemented the feeling. Most writers just can't pull off big universe-changing things like that without it seeming too deus et machina. Leiko's proclamation / threat about the revolt was the only thing that threw me off. with all the build up it got, having her be just a good person who wanted to help people felt a bit mary-sue-ish. I was looking forward to something nasty. Having either less buildup or a rant about revenge and how no matter what they did, they'd all pay, would have worked better, I think. (of course, then it would have been harder to rehabilitate her...shrug). In any case, it was truly wonderful. thanks. |
 Niph (Niphredill@seznam.cz) 2009-04-18 . chapter 29 Okay, I have to admit this is The Best novel-lenght bleach fanfic I have read. The characters are all acting as if Kubo was writing this himself. The story is very captivating and interesting and original. I have to admit that at times I couldn't read the whole paragraphs because I was jumping on the edge of my seat biting my nails. I will have to go back and read the whole chapters (that was in the Sphere part). Really, it was amazing. Thank you for the experience :) |
 Maireilla 2009-03-08 . chapter 29*fan girl sque!* That was awesome! YAY! HAPPY DANCE! |
 Maireilla 2009-03-08 . chapter 28YAY! HAPPY ENDING! |
 Maireilla 2009-03-08 . chapter 27Poor Kira. I'm glad Leiko is coming around. |
 Maireilla 2009-03-08 . chapter 26WHoaoa! Are they really there?! CRAZY! I never even thought about Hisagi...wow. |
 Maireilla 2009-03-08 . chapter 25Well, what is he doing with her? lol. |
 Maireilla 2009-03-08 . chapter 24Wow. I was about to say, WHAT?!?!? lol. |
 Maireilla 2009-03-08 . chapter 23Ahahahahaha! I knew it! No, just kidding, I didn't. She's smart. |